雅思口語話題及范文:idea for improving something at work
2024-04-18 17:33:10 來源：中國教育在線
雅思口語話題及范文:idea for improving something at work
題目
You should say:
When and where you had your idea
What your idea was
Who you told about your idea
And explain why you thought your idea would make an improvement.
你應該說：
你在何時何地有了自己的想法
你的想法是什么
你把你的想法告訴了誰
并解釋為什么你認為你的想法會有所改進。
范文
I used to teach in a school which had 1,600 students, aged from 11 to 18. The majority of the children aged from 11 to 16 remained in school all day and if they had to leave，they did so via the school office and the main entrance. The school was situated in the centre of the town and was always in danger of having intruders. The students aged from 16 to 18 were allowed to leave whenever they pleased by an exit far from the main office. This exit/entrance remained open throughout the day and therefore intruders could get in.
The proposal I made was that the open gate should be replaced by a high security sliding gate. The gate would open for a fixed period after a student used a swipe plastic card to activate the opening mechanism. I got the idea from the type of cards used in hotels to replace room keys. Cards could easily exclude intruders from the system by having the whole system linked to a computer. The system would have also kept a computerised record of the movement of each student in and out of the building. If a student forgot his/her card，they would have to exit via the main entrance and the school office.
Sadly, my idea was not adopted because of the cost and the fact that the students objected a computerised record of their entries and departures from the school.
我曾在一所有1600名學生的學校任教，年齡從11歲到18歲。大多數(shù)11歲至16歲的兒童整天留在學校，如果必須離開，他們會通過學校辦公室和正門離開。這所學校位于市中心，總是有入侵者的危險。16歲至18歲的學生可以在遠離主辦公室的出口處隨時離開。該出口/入口全天開放，因此入侵者可以進入。
我提出的建議是，應該用一個高安全性的滑動門來代替敞開的門。學生使用刷卡啟動開啟機制后，大門將開啟一段固定的時間。我是從酒店用來代替房間鑰匙的卡片類型中得到這個想法的。通過將整個系統(tǒng)連接到計算機，卡可以輕松地將入侵者排除在系統(tǒng)之外。該系統(tǒng)還將保存每個學生進出大樓的計算機記錄。如果學生忘了帶卡，他們必須從正門和學校辦公室離開。
遺憾的是，我的想法沒有被采納，因為成本太高，而且學生們反對用計算機記錄他們的入學和離校情況。
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