雅思大作文范文：懲罰損害公共財產(chǎn)的人社區(qū)服務(wù)

2022-10-18 15:57:53 來源：中國教育在線

雅思大作文范文：懲罰損害公共財產(chǎn)的人社區(qū)服務(wù)

雅思大作文題目：

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

People who damage public property,such as buildings or statues should be required to do community service(such as cleaning parks)as a punishment rather than other forms of punishment(such as paying a fine or going to prison).

To what extent do you agree to disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

社會生活、犯罪

【題目解析】

題目大意：對公共財產(chǎn)設(shè)施，如房屋、雕塑等，造成損害的人，應(yīng)當(dāng)被要求做社區(qū)服務(wù)作為懲罰，比如打掃公園，而不是其他形式的懲罰，如罰款或關(guān)監(jiān)獄。你是否同意？

【難點】本題是很細(xì)節(jié)的犯罪話題分析，觀點雖然比較容易確定，但論證的展開難度較大，需要考生對犯罪話題的詞匯搭配有積累，同時對犯罪懲治有基本的分析思路。

【寫作思路】

開頭段：引出公共財產(chǎn)破壞的懲罰有爭議，表明觀點：懲罰應(yīng)該是多樣的，不局限于社區(qū)服務(wù)，根據(jù)破壞的程度有不同量刑。

主體第一段：論述一些輕度的沒有嚴(yán)重影響的損壞，可以通過社區(qū)服務(wù)來懲罰；對少年犯也是一種教育。

主體第二段：論述一些有必要進(jìn)行罰款和加重懲罰的情形，如嚴(yán)重?fù)p壞、文物損壞、縱火等。

結(jié)尾段：總結(jié)懲治公共財產(chǎn)損害的整體思路—考慮損壞的形式和嚴(yán)重程度、財產(chǎn)的性質(zhì)等。

【參考范文】

In modern society,although most people treat public property with respect,it is not uncommon to see damages done to buildings,statues or public facilities.When it comes to how the punishment should be measured,some people suggest that offenders do community service to make up for their doing,instead of fine or imprisonment.In my opinion,however,offences of damage to property can vary in seriousness,thus a series of punitive measures will be needed.

For minor incidents of damage where replacement costs are minimal,light punishment,such as community work,should suffice.For instance,if a person is accused of scratching a garden bench,or drawing on walls of buildings,he can be required to repair the damage or clean up graffiti as compensation.This form of punishment can also be applied to underaged offenders who are not criminally liable,because for adolescents,participating in community work can be educational,whereas heavy penalty is likely to bring out rebellious reaction.In short,serving the community as a punishment would be sufficient for inconsequential property damages.

However,legal sanction needs to be considered when offenders have caused damage of great value to public property.For one thing,financial penalty can be justified when the damage is excessive,let alone property destruction.It would also be reasonable to charge a person who intentionally leaves a mark on heritage properties or archaeological sites,even if the wreckage is insignificant.For another,serious damages involving dangerous criminality,such as arson,should be prosecuted by law,with more deliberate sentencing.These offences will not only cause permanent impairment to public property itself,but also pose risks for people's life.

In summary,punitive measures regarding damage to public property assets would need to take into account of many factors,including the level and form of damage,the nature of property and offenders.Therefore,community service,financial punishment,and imprisonment will all be needed in different situations.

(321 words)

【語言積累】

treat…with respect尊重的對待

when it comes to涉及到

offender n.犯罪者，有違規(guī)行為的人

make up for補償

offence n.過失、犯罪、過錯、違規(guī)行為

punitive measures懲罰措施

minor incident小事故

light punishment輕度懲罰

suffice vi.足夠

be accused of被指責(zé)…