2022年1月15雅思大作文范文:用社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)進行聯(lián)系的利弊

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2022年1月15雅思大作文范文

2022年1月15雅思大作文范文:用社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)進行聯(lián)系的利弊，關(guān)于這個問題，接下來中國教育在線就給大家慢慢解答。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and news events.

Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

社會生活

【題目解析】

題目大意：有很多人每天使用社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)來聯(lián)系他人，以及獲取新聞。你認為這其中的優(yōu)勢是否多于劣勢？

【備注】本題相對簡單，更多的同學(xué)會傾向于在寫作時選擇更容易展開的’優(yōu)勢大于劣勢’來進行論述，本次將提供‘劣勢大于優(yōu)勢’的論述，給同學(xué)們更多的參考。

【難點及要點】社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)的涉及面較廣，但題目聚焦在交流和新聞獲取兩方面，因此同學(xué)們也需要注意不過度展開。

【寫作思路】

開頭段：引出社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的廣泛，并表明個人觀點。

主體第一段：認可社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用帶來的便利；

主體第二段：轉(zhuǎn)折到社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)用于獲取新聞的弊端，從新聞的真實性和人們的不良的看新聞習(xí)慣著手；

主體第三段：進一步指出社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)用于交流的弊端，從降低交流質(zhì)量入手；

結(jié)尾段：重申個人的觀點

【參考范文】

Beyond daily communication, social media has also been used as a platform of spreading news events. Owing to this development, many people now have instant access to current issues. Despite the convenience and efficiency, I personally believe there are more disadvantages in such excessive use of social media.

It is true that the current technology and social media make news available to the public sooner than any conventional media like newspapers. This not only enables a faster coverage of news, but reduces the use of printed materials to some extent. What also needs to be acknowledged is the significance of social media in promoting interpersonal communication and information exchange. In extreme cases, like during Corona virus prevention and control, social media has proved its liability as an alternative for offline activities, such as family gatherings and school orientations.

However, many people are so tied up with social network that they tend to overlook the long-term side effects. The major problem with using social media in news reporting is that there tends to be a lack of fact verification before the sharing process happens. People are easily overwhelmed by the political arguments, posted selfies, shared links, and brand videos that enter the average news feed every day. When reading current events on social media, many people are found just scrolling past headlines and not wanting to read them, either because of information overload or the suspicion of fake news.

The notion that social media improves communication also tends to be simplistic and idealized. Very often, the quality of an online conversation is unfavorable because one cannot sense the emotion from the other person. Reliance on social media could hurt a person’s ability to have a face-to-face conversation, since it is unusual to convey a thoughtful message through spoken word or instant texting. Thus, the dependence on social network has in fact reduced communication quality.

To conclude, my view is that the benefits of using social media as a mean of daily contact and news events are tiny, compared with the negative repercussions in the long run. The excessive use has caused an unhealthy environment in society.

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【語言積累】

a platform of 一種…的平臺

have instant access to 可以即時獲取

excessive adj. 過度的

make sth available to sb 讓某人可以獲得某物

conventional media 傳統(tǒng)媒體

a faster coverage of news 更快的新聞報道

in extreme cases 在極端的情況下

be tied up with 被…套牢

overlook v. 忽視

long-term side effects 長遠的副作用