2022年12月24日雅思大作文范文:構(gòu)建完美社會的要素

2022年12月24日雅思大作文范文:構(gòu)建完美社會的要素

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Write about the following topic:

Throughout history,people have dreamed of living in a perfect society,but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like.

What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world?

How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

社會生活類

【題目解析】

題目大意：縱觀歷史，人們一直夢想著生活在完美的社會中，但他們并沒有就理想社會的樣子達(dá)成共識。你認(rèn)為在現(xiàn)代，完美社會最重要的元素是什么？為實現(xiàn)理想社會，人們可以作出何種努力？

題型特點：本題屬于兩問組合題型?？忌氠槍蓚€問題作出回應(yīng)，并提供相應(yīng)的細(xì)節(jié)展開。

本文結(jié)構(gòu)：開頭段引入話題和表明立場、兩個主體段分別回答問題的兩個部分，結(jié)尾重申個人立場。

【難點】構(gòu)思過程應(yīng)該注意將話題相關(guān)概念（理想社會具有什么特點）具體化，更加深入討論。

【寫作思路】

開頭段：理想社會盡管有各種名稱和形式而且極難實現(xiàn)，但長期以來一直是哲學(xué)家、政治領(lǐng)袖和普通公民的共同愿望。因此，確定其核心特征，以便朝著這個崇高的目標(biāo)前進(jìn)就非常重要了。

主體段1：完美世界中可能有許多重要因素，但我認(rèn)為主要的是平等。在機會、種族、性別以及獲得教育和保健等基本服務(wù)方面尤其如此，因此平等應(yīng)該被寫入任何現(xiàn)代社會的憲法，以便促進(jìn)公平和成功。為所有社區(qū)成員提供公平的競爭環(huán)境，可以確保沒有人僅因為背景或環(huán)境而不利。這也將為整個社會促進(jìn)凝聚、團(tuán)結(jié)和繁榮。

主體段2：建立理想社會并非易事，但可以通過合作、奉獻(xiàn)和努力來實現(xiàn)。人們可以通過個人和社區(qū)層面的積極變化來實現(xiàn)這一理想狀態(tài)。這可能包括更多參與公共事務(wù)，投票給擁有相同價值觀的立法者，以及參與促進(jìn)平等的計劃。此外，個人還應(yīng)該尋找機會幫助有需要的人--無論是在本地慈善機構(gòu)做志愿者，還是為弱勢群體提供支持。對創(chuàng)建包容和公平的社會來說，所有措施都是重要墊腳石。

結(jié)尾段：總的來說，在構(gòu)建完美社會時，促進(jìn)社區(qū)成員間的平等是至關(guān)重要的。為此，必須作出協(xié)調(diào)一致努力，在個人層面和整個社區(qū)改變?nèi)藗兊乃季S方式。

【參考范文】

The ideal society,despite its various names and forms and exceeding difficulty to attain,has long been a common aspiration for philosophers,political leaders and common citizens alike.It is therefore crucial to identify its core feature so as to progress towards this noble goal.

There are a number of elements that could be considered important in a perfect world,but I believe that the main one is equality.This is especially true in terms of opportunity,race,gender and access to essential services such as education and healthcare,so it should be enshrined into the constitution of any modern society in order for it to be fair and successful.Having a level playing field for all community members can ensure that no individual is disadvantaged simply due to their background or circumstances.This will also lead to greater social cohesion,unity,and prosperity for all members of society.

Forming an ideal society is no easy feat,but it can be done through collaboration,dedication and hard work.People can work towards this desired state by encouraging positive change in their personal lives and in the wider community.This could involve becoming more civically engaged,voting for lawmakers who share similar values and participating in initiatives that promote equality.Furthermore,individuals should also seek out opportunities to help those in need–whether that is volunteering with a local charity or providing support for marginalised communities.All these measures serve as essential stepping stones towards creating an inclusive and equitable society.

In general,it is critical to promote equality among community members in an attempt to construct a perfect society.To this end,concerted efforts must be made to change people’s mindsets both at the personal level and as a community at large.

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【語言積累】

1.exceeding difficulty to attain實現(xiàn)的難度極大

2.common aspiration共同追求

3.access to essential services享用基本服務(wù)（的機會）

4.be enshrined into the constitution寫進(jìn)憲法中

5.a level playing field公平環(huán)境

6.social cohesion,unity,and prosperity社會凝聚、團(tuán)結(jié)和繁榮

7.becoming more civically engaged參與更多社會事務(wù)

8.volunteering with a local charity為本地慈善團(tuán)體做義工

9.providing support for marginalised communities幫助弱勢群體

10.stepping stones踏腳石

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