雅思大作文范文：因魅力財富知名的人樹立不好榜樣

雅思大作文范文：因魅力財富知名的人樹立不好榜樣

雅思大作文題目：

Nowadays,there are many celebrities who are famous for their glamour and wealth rather than achievements.This is a bad example for young people.To what extent do you agree with this statement?

【話題分類】：社會生活類

【題目解析】：

題目大意：當今許多名人因為魅力和財富而知名，卻并非由于成就，這給年輕人樹立了不好的榜樣。你在何種程度上同意這個觀點？

題型特點：對觀點需要表明清晰的立場；但該題目觀點包含了兩部分內(nèi)容，“前提”與“觀點”，考生可能會在如何回應(yīng)題目時，產(chǎn)生混淆，想到的思路太多，反而不知從何下手。

【難點】

本題主要在立論和對題目兩部分觀點的態(tài)度上，容易讓考生搖擺。

建議：請各位考生先明確，寫作的目標是“能清晰的表明立場，有理有據(jù)的證明”。

這里給各位分享幾種不同的觀點，和論證思路，在這道題目中都是可行的。

1.觀點完全同意。開頭引出現(xiàn)象，表明立場。中間用2-3個論點結(jié)合論據(jù)，證明這樣的名人現(xiàn)象對年輕人有哪些不好的榜樣作用。結(jié)尾重申觀點。

2.觀點完全同意。開頭引出現(xiàn)象，表明立場。中間第一段證明這種現(xiàn)象的不利影響，第二段讓步雖然這種現(xiàn)象對年輕人也有激勵，因為表明成為名人的門檻降低。但終究傳遞了走捷徑便可成功的價值觀，并不值得提倡。結(jié)尾重申觀點。

3.觀點部分同意。開頭引出現(xiàn)象，表明“雖然因魅力和財富出名的名人現(xiàn)象對年輕人有不好的影響，但不乏能樹立正面榜樣的名人?！爸虚g第一段證明題目中的現(xiàn)象所帶來的負面效應(yīng)，第二段轉(zhuǎn)折表明有一些因真正的成就而知名的名人，他們帶來了積極作用。結(jié)尾重申觀點“題目中這類現(xiàn)象確實是不好的例子，年輕人應(yīng)當更關(guān)注更為有能力的名人?！?/p>

4.觀點部分同意。開頭引出現(xiàn)象，表明“雖然名人對粉絲影響巨大，但其影響本質(zhì)上取決于受眾如何理解，所以不能完全認為是他們樹立了不好的榜樣?！爸虚g第一段證明一些負面影響是真實可見的，第二段表明這些負面效應(yīng)并不完全由這些名人導(dǎo)致。結(jié)尾重申觀點“的確名人效應(yīng)很大程度上影響著年輕人，但不能全然認為是他們樹立的不好的榜樣?！?/p>

以上四種立論，都能做到清晰回答題目的問題。但從邏輯論證的難度來講，1、2、3對于考生來說，更容易展開和講清楚。

*本次范文以思路2為例。

【寫作思路】：

開頭段：當今大家成名更多是由于財富和個人魅力，而非職業(yè)成就。一些人認為這給現(xiàn)在年輕人樹立了不合適的榜樣。我很贊同他們的觀點。

主體第一段：這種趨勢影響了：1）年輕一代的日常生活，可能養(yǎng)成奢侈的模式。2）年輕人的思維方式，可能認為很容易就可以成名。

主體第二段：雖然一些人認為這不一定是壞事，因為成名的門檻降低后，年輕人會認為比之前更容易成功。但當今的名人文化傳遞的價值觀念讓年輕人只看到了名利虛妄的一面，卻忽視努力的重要性。

結(jié)尾段：總的來說，這種價值觀會對年輕人造成負面影響。

【參考范文】

These days,celebrities are making headlines more for their glamour and their fortune than their professional accomplishments,which in some people's opinion,sets unsuitable role models for the young generation.I personally agree with their perspective.

The adverse influences of this worldwide trend penetrate into young people's daily life as well as their mindset.When celebrities are only noted for being rich and attractive,children and young adults who adore them are likely to form an extravagant lifestyle,because they sometimes follow their role models blindly.In their quest to live like idols,youngsters often imitate the flashy lifestyles–fast cars,expensive jewelry and designer clothes.On a deeper level,this fascination with appearance and wealth sends out a misleading message to today's young generation,promoting the idea that hard work and perseverance are less significant,and that success can be achieved easily.

Some would argue that it is not entirely a bad thing when celebrities are known for their material possessions and glamourous images,because it means that the barrier to fame has been lowered.In this case,young people seem to find success more attainable than it used to be.However,today's celebrity culture teaches the youth that being a successful person is about little more than having an eye-catching profile.It teaches them to cut corners in order to achieve fame,and to boast about it once they have succeeded.In light of this,they only see the superficial side of fame and possibly do not understand or appreciate the efforts that make one successful.

To sum up,young individuals can be negatively influenced by vacuous celebrities whose fame is predicated upon very little achievement but image and fortune,since they deliver a set of value that would deteriorate the young generation.

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【亮點詞匯及短語】

1.make headlines成為頭條

2.professional accomplishment職業(yè)成就

3.adverse adj.負面的

4.be noted for因…知名

5.extravagant adj.奢侈的

6.blindly adj.盲目的

7.in one's quest to在追求…的過程中

8.designer clothes名牌服裝

9.on a deeper level在更深的層次上

10.send out a message傳遞一個信息

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