2022年4月30日雅思寫作回憶:世界范圍內(nèi)四種魚的數(shù)量

2022年4月30日雅思寫作回憶

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

注：圖形根據(jù)考場回憶繪制，具體細(xì)節(jié)或有出入。

【圖形分類】

線形圖

【題目解析】

這是一篇典型的折線圖，描述了從1982年到2007年四種不同種類的魚的數(shù)量變化。從圖中可以看到四條線段的特征都非常明顯，Atlantic Cod和Yellowfin Tuna的數(shù)量最開始都在150000以上，而且在這25年時(shí)間里呈現(xiàn)下降趨勢，然而Haddock和Swordfish卻都低于100000，其中Swordfish的量一直都處于非常少的狀態(tài)。

【寫作思路】

開頭段： 改寫題目

綜述段： Atlantic Cod和Yellowfin Tuna呈現(xiàn)下降趨勢，然而Haddock和Swordfish保持不變。Swordfish在這一段時(shí)間里都是最小值。

主體段一： 描述Atlantic Cod的變化趨勢

主體段二： 描述Yellowfin Tuna和Haddock和Swordfish的變化趨勢

【參考范文】

The line graph illustrates how the number of four different types of fish worldwide changed from 1982 to 2007.

Overall, the Atlantic Cod and Yellowfin Tuna witnessed a declining trend toward the end of the period, while Haddock and Swordfish remained unchanged. It is evident that the number of Swordfish was at the minimum in numbers throughout the 25 years.

In 1982, Atlantic Cod held the largest proportion among four species, accounting for nearly 230,000. However, it dropped sharply in the next ten years, reaching 150,000 by 1992. Afterwards, this figure picked up again and climbed slightly to appropriately 170,000 in 2002, but decreasing to less than 150,000 in 2007.

Yellowfin Tuna, serving as the second largest number of fish species, started at 150,000 in 1982. In the next ten years, it experienced an opposing tendency to Atlantic Cod, rising to a peak of 200,000 in 1992. Following this, there was a sharp fall of around 4000 for every five years and finally went down to 100,000 in 2007. Haddock and Swordfish demonstrated a similar trend, leveling off at nearly 70,000 and 10,000 in numbers throughout the given period.

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