2022年9月24日雅思大作文范文:機(jī)器人對(duì)人類的影響

2022年9月24日雅思大作文范文:機(jī)器人對(duì)人類的影響

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that robots are very important to human's future development,while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

科技類

【題目解析】

題目大意：一些人認(rèn)為機(jī)器人對(duì)于人類未來(lái)發(fā)展十分重要，但是另一些人認(rèn)為它們非常危險(xiǎn)并且對(duì)社會(huì)有消極影響。討論雙方觀點(diǎn)并給出你的看法。

【思路分析】本題考查機(jī)器人所帶來(lái)的影響。在之前的題目當(dāng)中曾經(jīng)也出現(xiàn)過(guò)類似主題。關(guān)于機(jī)器人的討論，大家比較熟悉的應(yīng)該是在就業(yè)方面的影響，也就是會(huì)導(dǎo)致大量失業(yè)。此外消極影響也可以從安全性角度以及后期是否會(huì)產(chǎn)生智能危害人類角度，不過(guò)不建議寫成很多電影或科幻小說(shuō)中呈現(xiàn)的過(guò)于遙遠(yuǎn)的機(jī)器統(tǒng)治地球等內(nèi)容。好處方面也比較容易想到，主要是在完成工作時(shí)的表現(xiàn)以及完成的工作種類方面，此外機(jī)器人目前也普遍應(yīng)用在醫(yī)療、家用、娛樂(lè)等各種場(chǎng)景，將來(lái)會(huì)有更多的功能和潛力改變?nèi)祟惿睢?/p>

【寫作思路】

開(kāi)頭段：改寫題目雙方觀點(diǎn)，表明自己的立場(chǎng)。

主體第一段：說(shuō)明機(jī)器人的廣泛使用可能會(huì)帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題。主要是兩個(gè)方面，包括事業(yè)問(wèn)題以及突發(fā)情況時(shí)不能靈活處理問(wèn)題，可能帶來(lái)更大的損失等。

主體第二段：說(shuō)明機(jī)器人能夠?yàn)槿祟惏l(fā)展帶來(lái)的好處。包括工作方面可以解放勞動(dòng)力，并且完成危險(xiǎn)和人類不能做的工作。并且在生活場(chǎng)景中的應(yīng)用廣泛也可以帶來(lái)生活質(zhì)量的提高。

結(jié)尾段：強(qiáng)調(diào)個(gè)人立場(chǎng)，表明新技術(shù)的出現(xiàn)總會(huì)帶來(lái)很大的變化，但是機(jī)器人對(duì)人類的未來(lái)發(fā)展的重要性是肯定的。

【參考范文】

Our society has been undergoing numerous technological changes,among which is the rapid growth of the robotics industry.While some people express their concerns about the possible adverse impacts,I would argue that robots can offer vast benefits for humans’future development.

On the one hand,the worry about the rise of robotics is justifiable,considering that jobs become casualties.As robots are versatile machines that often complete tasks with precision and ask for no perks such as insurance and paid time off,they appear more competitive than human beings in certain occupations.The assembly line in the automobile industry has already shown that the shift from human labor to machines can yield higher productivity.Another doubt people hold lies in the safety issue because there are situations where robots fail to handle an emergency flexibly but operate as they are programmed,causing damages that otherwise humans could avoid.These incidents inevitably lower people’s trust in automation.

On the other hand,I would side with others who have confidence in robots.Implementing robots benefit employees since they free workers from repetitive and tedious tasks and allow them more time for creative work and innovation.As for dangerous tasks such as defusing bombs or space exploration,robots save lives and go beyond human beings’capacities,accomplishing what people cannot do.Additionally,in a daily life context,this game-changing technology has been adopted in the healthcare industry,assisting surgery or helping disabled and senior people to lead better lives.Its application in entertainment,households,and personal life is thriving,leading to further improvements in individuals’lives.

In conclusion,as with any revolutionary technology,robots would give rise to drastic changes,including negative ones like job displacement.But new industries and businesses that people never imagined would also ensue.Therefore,I am convinced that robots will play a crucial role in humans’future progression.

(311 words)

【語(yǔ)言積累】

undergo v.經(jīng)歷，經(jīng)受

express concerns表達(dá)擔(dān)憂

adverse impacts消極影響

justifiable adj.有理由的

casualty n.受害者

versatile adj.多才多藝的，有多種技能的

precision n.精確，精準(zhǔn)

perks n.特殊待遇

paid time off帶薪休假

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