雅思大作文范文：積極的或消極的競爭力如何影響個人

雅思大作文范文：積極的或消極的競爭力如何影響個人

雅思大作文題目：

Competitiveness is considered to be an important quality for people in many societies.How do you think it affects individuals?Is it a positive or negative trend?

【話題分類】：抽象類

【題目解析】：

本篇文章要求考生討論競爭力對于如何影響個人，并分析競爭力是積極還是消極的特點。

通常這種抽象類題目在進行分析時，可以采用具體分類的方式，比如題目中的individual，可以在文中分別從學生和工作者的角度來進行討論，也可以將不同情況下競爭帶來的好處和壞處進行分類，如良性的競爭能夠讓人進步且更好達成目標，而過度競爭或不良競爭則會讓人自私狂妄，無法很好地融入新環(huán)境等。

雖然這個題目的提問方式是兩個題目，相當于組合類題型，但可以直接按照利弊分析文章的結(jié)構(gòu)來撰寫。在分析競爭對人的利弊的同時，相應(yīng)地回答第一個題目即競爭如何對個人產(chǎn)生影響的。

【寫作思路】：

開頭段：背景句+話題引出+亮明觀點；

主體第一段：競爭力給人帶來的優(yōu)勢和好處；

主體第二段：競爭力可能給人帶來的弊端和破壞；

結(jié)尾段：重申個人觀點+總結(jié)至少一個觀點。

【參考范文】

Competitiveness serves as a double-edged sword for individuals in most societies.Some people argue that being competitive positively impacts people's lives,while others believe that competitiveness imposes negative results.This essay will consider both points of view before reaching my opinion.

To begin with,being competitive provides incentives for people to excel in what they do.By competing with others,one has to develop various skills and nurture perseverance until achieving final goals.This is particularly the case for athletes aiming at defeating rivals and winning the championship in national or international games.Furthermore,people with a competitive personality can expand their comfort zone.In other words,it is important to get conditioned to the frustration and uncertainty brought by competitions.Learning from failures helps them build up resilience and become more capable adults.

On the other hand,opponents argue that competitiveness can be destructive to individuals.First of all,an intense level of competition places too much unnecessary stress and anxiety.People may feel disappointed and defeated when failing to measure up or efforts are not recognized.These negative experiences may destroy their self-esteem and affect their mental health.In addition,competition may hinder individuals from adapting to a new environment.If people incessantly concentrate on competing instead of cooperating,they tend to be self-conceited and self-centred,establishing a poor rapport with the peer group.

In conclusion,competitiveness is beneficial to individuals in general despite a few downsides.Instead of being mediocre and unmotivated,it is better for people to be distinguished with exceptional abilities.A person should find a balance and avoid being over-competitive;otherwise,the consequences can be severe.

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【亮點詞匯及短語】

1.serve as作為

2.double-edged(adj.)雙刃的

3.incentive(n.)刺激，動力

4.nurture(v.)培養(yǎng)

5.perseverance(n.)堅韌

6.rival(n.)對手

7.championship(n.)冠軍

8.comfort zone舒適區(qū)，安全區(qū)

9.frustration(n.)挫折，打擊

10.uncertainty(n.)不確定

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