2022年9月3日雅思大作文范文:大一新生對自己的專業(yè)不滿意

2022年9月3日雅思大作文范文:大一新生對自己的專業(yè)不滿意

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some college freshmen find that the subjects they choose are not suitable for them.

What are the causes of this?

What can be done to solve the problem?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

教育類

【題目解析】

題目大意：很多大一新生對自己的專業(yè)不滿意。為什么會出現(xiàn)這個問題？如何解決這個問題。

這個題目中有一個關鍵詞“subject”，這個單詞的意思是“an area of knowledge that is studied in school,college,or university”，所以中文應該理解為“專業(yè)”，與major和specialisation進行替換。

這個題目屬于“報告文”，要求考生回答兩個問題；全文需要四個段落，即：開頭段（改寫題目+簡要回答題目中的兩個問題），主體1（回答第一個問題），主體2（回答第二個問題），結(jié)尾段（總結(jié)主體兩個段的內(nèi)容）

【寫作思路】

Para 1=題目改寫+簡要回答題目兩個問題

Para 2=主體1（兩個原因）

原因1：選專業(yè)前沒有充分了解

原因2：大學課程設置不合理

Para 3=主體2（兩個解決辦法）

解決辦法1：選專業(yè)前作調(diào)查（查閱大學網(wǎng)站；參加大學開放日）

解決辦法2：大學定期評估課程（教學團隊討論；征求學生反饋）

Para 4=總結(jié)段

【參考范文】

These days,a proportion of first-year university students are not content with their elected fields of study.This essay will initially explain why this is happening,followed by some strategies which can resolve this issue.

There are primarily two factors behind why some new tertiary pupils are finding their majors unsuitable.The first one is that they have little understanding of the subjects before making their decision.Some students choose interpretation as their major because different media resources they are exposed to make them believe that being an interpreter is a“cool”job.However,a fact they may neglect is their inability to bear the intensive training,discouraging them from continuing their learning.Another point is that the courses are not structured well.Some might only have lectures while tutorials are excluded;also,students may have limited time to study before a new topic comes.All these will provide students with insufficient opportunities to digest the knowledge.

To tackle this challenge,several approaches can be adopted.To begin with,students can conduct early research regarding the courses they intend to take.They can browse the internet,especially university websites,to gain more information about their majors.Alternatively,they can attend the Open Day of their ideal universities,during which time constructive suggestions can be given by the lecturers and professors on the spot.Additionally,universities should review different aspects of their courses on a regular basis.Teaching teams themselves can organise meetings to discuss how to improve their courses,and different schools can rely on students’feedback as a significant source of data upon which to make changes to better cater to all students.

In conclusion,students’lack of understanding of their selected majors prior to final decisions and unreasonable course settings are the main causes of some university freshmen being unsatisfied with their courses.However,if students do some research on what they want to learn in advance,and meanwhile,universities evaluate their course syllabuses regularly,this problem can be solved effectively.

(333 words)

【亮點詞匯及短語】

1.first-year university students大一新生

2.specialisation(n.)專業(yè)

3.tertiary pupils大學生

4.unsuitable(adj.)不合適的

5.make decisions做決定

6.interpretation(n.)口譯

7.intensive training強化訓練

8.discourage sb.from doing sth.使某人泄氣而不做某事

9.structure(v.)結(jié)構(gòu)

10.lecture(n.)講課

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