資深老師實例講解托福作文模板使用方法

資深老師實例講解托福作文模板使用方法，相信這個問題是許多正在準備留學(xué)的同學(xué)關(guān)心的一個問題，那么下面小編就來和大家說一說，感興趣的您趕緊往下了解吧。

實例講解如何使用托福作文模板：不知何時，“模板”這個詞已經(jīng)悄悄興起，并且漸漸占據(jù)了托福寫作備考的半邊天。那么，“托福寫作模板”有沒有使用的價值呢？當(dāng)然，如果你能夠恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂猛懈懽髂０鍖懽魑?，不僅能夠節(jié)省時間，也能迅速捋清思路，構(gòu)架自己的托福作文結(jié)構(gòu)。不過，千篇一律的托福寫作模板的使用，也會是托福閱卷老師產(chǎn)生審美疲勞，即使沒有語法錯誤，使用托福寫作模板做出來的作文一般也不會得到高分?！　∷裕覀円斆鞯?、原創(chuàng)性的使用托福寫作模板，下面，大家就通過這兩個例子來學(xué)習(xí)如何使用托福寫作模板吧！　　先來看兩段例子!第一段是不好的例子，第二段是好的例子?！　owadays, thanks to the development of Internet, we are exposed to a vast ocean of information. Some argue that so much information brings a great benefit to our life and study. But for me, the experience with surfing Internet leads me to believe that accessing much information cause more problems than it solves.　　——————————————————————————————　　Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education. Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at. I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that preparing for careers should have primary consideration.　　作為閱文無數(shù)的老師，當(dāng)看到第一篇文章的時候，我已經(jīng)沒有了當(dāng)初得的興奮，因為這樣的文章實在是太常見了!首先Nowadays這個單詞是被無數(shù)老師推崇的“高級”單詞-_-!!!我一直無法理解，為什么有的單詞會更高級。然后thanks to節(jié)賓語，天吶!多么明顯的模板!當(dāng)我往下看的時候，我只能無意識的檢查是否有語法錯誤，沒有語法錯誤的話，我也就只能給個一般的分數(shù)就好了。　　但是當(dāng)老師看到第二篇文章的時候，初看覺得此文寫得不錯。用詞準確地道，而且完全是自己完成沒有模板，但是當(dāng)我回頭再一回味這篇文章的時候，驚訝的發(fā)現(xiàn)，這篇文章竟然也是由模板所出!首先Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education?？此破降瓱o奇，但是實際上Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to就是一個模板，更厲害的是下一句!Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at.這么長的一句話，竟然只有后3個單詞不是模板!然后再接下來，下一句的“given the chance, ”其實對于整句話來說根本就沒有任何實際上語義的改變!但適當(dāng)加進來之后，我們會感覺到非常的地道!之所以無老師感覺如此震驚，原因非常簡單，就是因為在這篇文章身上完全看不出半點模板的影子，為什么看不出模板的影子呢?就是因為這篇文章的模板是完全原創(chuàng)的，哪怕不是原創(chuàng)的，也是僅在小范圍內(nèi)流傳的!而且這篇文章后面類似的妙手不計其數(shù)!　　反過來再看國內(nèi)流傳甚廣的403模板，雖然也是勝在模板分量夠重，但是由于使用的人實在是太多，實際上已經(jīng)變成了一顆毒丸。除了讓考官惡心致死，爬起來之后給我們一個低分之外，別無其他的效果。當(dāng)然這里很多人很想看看403模板的陣容，這簡單，預(yù)知后事如何，且聽下回分解!請關(guān)注無老師接下來推出的

　　首先來看一下上文里面所提到的403模板。　　In a modern society, people always face the dilemma to choose whether AAA or BBB. This problem is the much debated one in that it affects everybody in their daily lives. People may prefer one to another although some may have no opinions about it at all. Before rendering my opinion, I think it is necessary to take a glance at the arguments of both sides.　　It is quite easy for average people to choose BBB because of the obvious reason that—. It can be given by a well known example that　　But at the mean time, although BBB has some advantages, it also has many drawbacks such as —. Therefore we have no complete evidence to suggest that BBB is always better than AAA. What is more, the innate quality of AAA, unfortunately, is often underestimated; in other words,if you notice the invisible benefits of choosing AAA, you can understand AAA more deeply　　Here I would explain a few of the most important reasons. The main reason is that —. To illustrate this, there is an appropriate example that is very persuasive: -　　— is only part of the important aspects, and another equally significant role of choosing AAA lies in the development of —.　　This demonstrates the undeniable fact that —.　　Besides, the further reason why I advocate AAA is that —. This may explain why —.　　In addition, some experts maintain that —-. This significant point, however, is often not noticed by most people and accordingly, is unconsciously overlooked　　Finally, as a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. Although I admit that there are a couple of advantages of —-, I still think that the disadvantages of it are more obvious. Such as —, —-, and —-. This demonstrates that we have no complete evidence to suggest that BBB is always better than AAA　　If all the factors above are considered, we will find out that the advantages of AAA outweigh those of BBB. Therefore from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that choosing AAA is a rather wise decision. But I have not denied the opinion that choosing BBB. I must admit that people can do well without AAA, but no one can ignore the added convenience and satisfaction offered by AAA. Such experience will definitely be helpful in one’s later life?！　∠襁@種開頭以In a modern society, people always face the dilemma to choose whether AAA or BBB.來作為開始的模板，實在是太多太普遍了。當(dāng)然還包括“Nowadays, some people hold the opinion that”“In modern society,”當(dāng)一看到這樣的標題，考官就好像用自己的左手握著自己的右手，絲毫感覺不到有任何的激情產(chǎn)生。但是同樣是模板，其實如果我們另辟蹊徑，換用一種完全不同的手法來寫，感覺就是十分的清新。Before rendering my stand, I think it is essential to take a glance at the argument on both sides. 就是這樣，雖然同樣也是在展示自己的觀點，但是由于完全不同于以前我們看到的十分程式化的模板。其實模板很多時候看的不是用多少詞，以及句型有多么的夸張，其實很多時候憑借前一個詞與我們以前看到的文章的匹配程度，就已經(jīng)有很強的感覺了。　　當(dāng)然我們在塑造模板的時候，也是要遵循一定的原則的：　　1. 確定文章主體框架結(jié)構(gòu)，包括引出觀點和總結(jié)觀點的詞匯，句式，這個可能是網(wǎng)大多數(shù)模板的水平;　　2. 確定論證過程的框架，每個支持段落都有各自的論證模式，舉例，因果，對比等，確定到論證的邏輯引導(dǎo)詞上;　　3. 通過改寫句子，采用合適的詞匯代替以上兩步的成果;　　4. 改變句式，將各類語法結(jié)夠加入其中：倒裝，獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，虛擬語氣等?！　∵@個思路是十分完備的，按照這個思路再加上充足的練習(xí)，幾乎可以預(yù)見到這篇作文的分數(shù)將是無限接近滿分的。

　　那么我們就照這個思路來走。首先第一步確定主體結(jié)構(gòu)，其實現(xiàn)在的托福作文總體來說大多采取3-5段式。第1段點題，第2-4段展開，后一段，也就是第5段收尾?！　∵@是整體的文章結(jié)構(gòu)，具體到每一段之內(nèi)，也是遵循這個思路，第1、2句表明本段的主題，然后接下來幾句話進行支持，如果是第一段、那么在該段落的后還要給第二段留出引子，以及在后一段后1、2句還要進行總結(jié)，以及強調(diào)自己的觀點?！　≈劣诘谌剑膶懢渥訉τ诖蠖鄶?shù)人來說，其實還是尋找句子，然后才是改寫句子。搜集句子與改寫句子其實是一個互相輔助的關(guān)系，你搜集的好句子多了，那么你改寫的難度就低了;反過來，你搜集的好句子少，那么相應(yīng)的要取得高分，你需要做的改寫就多了。因此從這個角度來看，還是一開始就把搜集句子這個步驟做扎實來得好?！　∫f搜集句子，首先要有一個堅強的后盾，那么這些后盾從哪里來呢?　　這要看你需要什么句子，如果是找每一段開篇點題的句子，比較好還是找一些文學(xué)性比較強的東西，比如說一些給白領(lǐng)看的經(jīng)濟類文章，我們經(jīng)常提到了的[經(jīng)濟學(xué)人].The.Economist.就屬此類。比如說無老師就從2008年11月15日這一期的第12頁找到了一個很好的句子，很適合當(dāng)文章的開頭。Asked what China will do to rescue the world from financial turmoil, its officials these days have a boilerplate answer：its greatest contribution will be to keep its own economy running smoothly.我們把它放在Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.這個作文題目之下，就可以改寫成Asked what teachers will do to improve their students, the response in high schools have a boilerplate answer：the greatest contribution of homework will be to keep its their students appreciating their knowledge entirely.

　　那么我們提煉一下Asked what …… will do to ……, the response in …… have a boilerplate answer：the greatest contribution of …… will be to keep its their …….就是一個十分出色的作文開頭模板。　　我們也可以從同樣是2008年11月15日這一期的120頁找到Further evidence of emerging markets’ potential comes from the experience of Britain’s AstraZeneca in China.這一句只要稍加修改就可以變成一個非常出色的2-4段的段落開頭，首先把他模板化Further evidence of …… comes from the experience of …… in …….然后再加入一點倒裝句式來證明我們的文學(xué)水平Not only does ……come from the experience of …… in ……., but (also) evidence of ……subsequently(further) prove……這樣一個出色的論證段的段首句模板就完成了。　　至于例子的模板，那么就是新聞的天下了，我們?nèi)匀豢梢栽凇督?jīng)濟學(xué)人The.Economist》里面尋找，當(dāng)然也可以到新華網(wǎng)的英文版里面尋找。無老師就找到了這么一句話South Korea’s capital city now has been named their most favored travel destination two years in row, according to the report, as 11.4 percent of the Chinese, 9.8 percent of the Japanese, and an overwhelming 20.0 percent of the Thai expressed their preference for Seoul, toppling cities like Tokyo, Paris and Honolulu in the survey. 這里面我們就可以把這個句子直接提煉為模板…… now has been named their most favored …… two years in row, according to the report, as 11.4 percent of the ……, 9.8 percent of the ……, and an overwhelming 20.0 percent of the …… expressed their preference for ……, toppling cities like …, … and … in the survey.相識的數(shù)字，加上確鑿的低點，一切顯得都是那么無可辯駁，但是實際上這就是一個模板。

　　當(dāng)然我們不肯能每一個句子都是這么長，因此我們可以加入很多For example, Therefore, 所引導(dǎo)的句子來增強文章內(nèi)部的節(jié)奏感，使得讀者不會感覺到過于疲憊?！　≈劣谀┒蔚哪０鍎t是有一些講究的，但是當(dāng)老師看了無數(shù)篇作文和《經(jīng)濟學(xué)人The.Economist》的文章之后，無老師開始反思我們很多學(xué)生寫的“ After ruminating over all these factors, ”“It is more advantageous for us to make decision alone,”“As far as I am concerned, I come to the notion that”這類作文結(jié)尾，是否是一種符合歐美人思維的文章，因為你只要稍微把經(jīng)濟學(xué)人的文章找?guī)灼恼碌慕Y(jié)尾看一下就會知道，其實這里面絕大多數(shù)時候，都是以羅列多方觀點作為末段的開頭。然后以開放式的筆法來進行結(jié)尾。這與我們很多學(xué)生寫的一面倒型的結(jié)尾是完全不同的。　　關(guān)于如何使用托福作文模板，本文就先講到這里，托福模板的作用肯定有，用好了還很驚人，各位托福考友們，對托福模板的使用還需要更加創(chuàng)新一點。

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