托福寫作范文|經(jīng)濟與環(huán)保托福寫作范文與解析

　　A or DA: Governments should focus its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development.

　　題型：呼吁題

　　論點：一邊倒（同意）

　　論證角度：利弊分析

　　開頭：同意政府應(yīng)該把財政預(yù)算更多地放在環(huán)保上 。（話題引入 +雙方 /某 方觀點呈現(xiàn) +我方觀點及過渡句）

　　The past several decades have witnessed that the world's economy is booming. Modern skyscrapers, convenient communications, fast transportations make it easier and cozier for people to live in this planet. However, people are beginning to realize that the great achievements today seem to be at the price of destroying the nature. They claim that governments should focus its budgets more on environment than on economic development. As for me, I am a big fan of environmental protection and I am wholeheartedly in agreement with this claim. Here are some reasons and examples to support my view.

　　中間段 1：環(huán) 境 保 護 關(guān) 系 到 每 一 個 人 的 健 康 問 題 。（ 主 題 句 +說理論 證 +細(xì)節(jié) 例子）

　　First, the environmental protection is closely bound up with the health of every single person in this world. If the environment is polluted, the basic elements people need to survive must be affected, and thus disastrous results may occur. Recently I have read an appalling fact from newspapers that there is a village in the center of China where the majority of its residents, including kids and seniors, suffer from cancer such as lung cancer, stomach cancer and lymph cancer. The investigators found that the villagers' drinking water is from a river that is severely contaminated by the industrial discharges of enterprises located at the upstream.

　　中間段 2：經(jīng) 濟 的 可 持 續(xù) 發(fā) 展 需 要 以 環(huán) 境 保 護 為 前 提 ，我 們 不 能 竭 澤 而 漁 。

　?。ㄖ黝}句 +說理論證 +細(xì)節(jié)例子）

　　In addition, the environmental protection is conducive to the sustainability of economic development. There are some idioms in China, “killing the hens for the egg”， “draining the pond for the fish”， and “burning the woods for the prey”。 These ancient wisdoms warn modern people not to gain profits at present without thinking of the future. In other words, we cannot simply satisfy the need of contemporary people regardless of the interest of our next generation. Imagine that if we were in excessive pursuit of economic development by consuming all the natural resources, hunting for precious animals mercilessly and cutting down forests, what will become of our descendants?

　　中間段 3：環(huán)境保護可以在一定程度上刺激經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展，比如可以發(fā)展旅 游業(yè) 。（主題句 +說理論證 +細(xì)節(jié)例子）

　　Last but not least, the environmental protection can boost the development of economy at the same time. For instance, a country that emphasizes on its environment must be a country famous for its sightseeing industry. I have been to Singapore in which I am not only amazed by its prosperous economy but also by its garden-?﹍ike environment. The lawns, the trees, the rivers are beautifully designed to fit into the city. This case well illustrates that the economic development and environmental protection sometimes construct no conflicts between each other.

　　結(jié)尾：重申觀點 +歸納理由 /升化主題。

　　To put it in a nutshell, governments should put its budgets on environmental protection than on economic development. In the process of achieving more prosperous economy, people should sometimes stop to think about whether the world we live could provide fresh air, clean water and healthy food, for these are fundamentally vital to the fate of human beings.