托福作文怎么寫

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此題有以下3種可能寫法：

(A)高鐵好，準(zhǔn)點(diǎn)、方便、舒服。

(B)高鐵好，準(zhǔn)點(diǎn)、方便、舒服，而飛機(jī)很有可能晚點(diǎn)，來往機(jī)場(chǎng)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，座位狹小，久坐不舒服。

(C)誠然，飛機(jī)時(shí)間更短(高鐵耗時(shí)長(zhǎng));但是，高鐵好，準(zhǔn)點(diǎn)(飛機(jī)很有可能晚點(diǎn))、方便(來往機(jī)場(chǎng)時(shí)間長(zhǎng))、舒服(飛機(jī)座位狹小，久坐不舒服)。

首先，A這種寫法沒有對(duì)比，只是列舉了高鐵好，而并沒有說明為什么高鐵比飛機(jī)好。這是很多考生寫對(duì)比型題目常犯的錯(cuò)誤。B這種寫法有對(duì)比，但是重復(fù)，即高鐵的優(yōu)點(diǎn)就是飛機(jī)的缺點(diǎn)?？扇〉氖荂這種寫法，列舉各自支持的理由，哪邊理由更多更充分就支持哪邊;而在一個(gè)段落內(nèi)部，還可以對(duì)比。

托福作文怎么寫？下面再看一篇高分學(xué)生考前練習(xí)作文。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.

(注：此文已更正語言錯(cuò)誤，原文請(qǐng)見附錄)

Nowadays, a lot of young people are having troubled minds of balancing job and social activities reasonably. From my perspective, I would say that one should spend more time on job which ensures a happier life than social life does.

Admittedly, social life forms an indispensable part of our life because spending time to gather with family and friends enables us to get a closer relationship with them. Naturally, it would bring us an ineffable sense of happiness.

However, the salary a decent job can offer seems to be more appealing to some people since it represents higher living condition and better material life which is obvious to see. For people who are similar to my elder sister, they seem to be more satisfied with a rich and abundant life. My elder sister Maggie is a life insurance actuary working in a big insurance company which is located in Northern Canada. As a qualified actuary with seven-year long working experience, Sister Maggie receives lots of money as the results of her hard work. And consequently, high salary from work enables her to live a prosperous life—Besides possessing two adjoining villas which are located in the centre of Toronto, she could also easily afford to pay the expense of sending her two children to best private schools and she would go to The Queen's Quay shopping mall every weekend to buy all sorts of luxury items. As for her, joyfulness coming from doing whatever she likes and being able to buy anything she wishes can not be replaced by any social gatherings.

Moreover, while people are working on their jobs, contributions they make to the whole society embody a sense of self-accomplishment. Teachers often find themselves working with a delightful mood and having accomplishment since they help kids to move ahead triumphantly. By praising a student who came up with an excellent answer in the class, teachers can make students feel confident, and consequently it is indeed a pleasure for teachers themselves as well. And after teachers impart knowledge, students learn and get a better understanding of all kinds of knowledge; teachers enjoy a satisfactory career life. So jobs make it a lot more possible for people to gain satisfaction with themselves compared with busying themselves doing social activities.

In general, the self-accomplishment and a rich and affluent life which job offers can be more significant in the process of pursuing well-being.

在分析這篇文章的時(shí)候，我們也把文章中的段首句抽出來。

However, the salary a decent job can offer seems to be more appealing to some people since it represents higher living condition and better material life which is obvious to see.

Moreover, while people are working on their jobs, contributions they make to the whole society embody a sense of self-accomplishment.

同樣，這兩句話也起到提綱挈領(lǐng)的作用。

關(guān)于這篇文章，大家也還有幾個(gè)疑問。首先，讓步段這么短，可以嗎?這篇文章哪里體現(xiàn)對(duì)比?這篇的讓步段很短，沒有展開，但是起到了和后面兩個(gè)段落對(duì)比的作用。而且在文章第三、四段末尾，也有對(duì)比。所以段落間有對(duì)比，而段落內(nèi)部也有對(duì)比。

Maggie的例子是真實(shí)的么?一眼就能看出，Maggie的例子是假的。文章中提到公司所在地Northern Canada和居住地Toronto是矛盾的，而且Northern Canada位于北極圈內(nèi)的不毛之地，應(yīng)該改為Southern Canada。這一點(diǎn)考官能看出來么?如果用人來看，一掃而過，還真不一定看得出來;如果是機(jī)器來看，應(yīng)該不會(huì)判斷。注意，這個(gè)例子雖然是假的，但是寫得非常具體，可以借鑒。

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