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2023-10-21 10:32:10 來源:中國教育在線

近年來,越來越多的中國學(xué)子選擇留學(xué),那其中托福獨(dú)立作文開頭怎么寫?本文則針對這個(gè)問題,為大家整理了資料,接下來咱們就一起往下了解吧。

托福獨(dú)立作文開頭怎么寫

托福獨(dú)立作文開頭怎么寫

1. 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)寫法:直接表明立場開門見山

題目:Businesses are as likely as are governments to establish large bureaucracies, but bureaucracy is far more damaging to a business than it is to a government.

模板:Contrary to the statement’s premise, my view is that businesses are less likely than government to establish large bureaucracies, because businesses know that they are more vulnerable than government to damage resulting from bureaucratic inefficiencies. My position is well supported by common sense and by observation.

點(diǎn)評:開門見山式的開頭段寫法其實(shí)是比較標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的一種寫法,因?yàn)橥懈5莫?dú)立寫作從題目要求來說本質(zhì)上就是一篇議論文,而且還是立論文,需要考生自己提出觀點(diǎn)然后論述證明。那么在開頭段就直接鮮明地亮出觀點(diǎn)無疑是很合理的寫法,對考官來說也能第一時(shí)間就看到你的觀點(diǎn),可以說是對讀者比較友好的一種寫法。比如上面的這個(gè)模板,就是第一句話直接寫出了自己對題目的反對立場,并且最后給出了引出下面正式論述的引導(dǎo)句。這種開頭段寫法雖然不玩花樣看似有點(diǎn)平淡甚至BORING,但對于不要求太多文筆更看重論述邏輯的議論文來說確實(shí)是比較高效的寫法,也很適合新手考生進(jìn)行模仿學(xué)習(xí)。

2.穩(wěn)妥寫法:先復(fù)述原題再引出觀點(diǎn)

題目:"We shape our buildings and afterwards our buildings shape us.”

模板:I believe this statement should be interpreted broadly—to mean that we are influenced by the exterior shape of buildings, as well as by the arrangement of multiple buildings and by a building’s various architectural and aesthetic elements. While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basic personality traits, I agree that they can greatly influence our attitudes, moods, and even life styles.

點(diǎn)評:這種寫法比起直接開門見山亮觀點(diǎn)的寫法來說可能更加穩(wěn)妥一些,畢竟先簡單復(fù)述題目再表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)是托福官方指南OG中比較推薦的開頭寫法。而且無論考生對題目觀點(diǎn)是否贊同,對題目復(fù)述之后進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)淖尣皆倭脸鲇^點(diǎn)也是一種比較委婉的表述方式。當(dāng)然這種寫法需要注意不能引用太多原題,而且不能照搬需要用自己的話來適當(dāng)改動(dòng)一下。這其中的度大家需要把握好,否則反而會(huì)引起一些不必要的扣分。

托福獨(dú)立寫作開頭模板

1. ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.

2.Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.

3.For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________. But people are taking a fresh look at it now.

4.It has stipulated by the government that ______________. To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________.

5.______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, ______________ can't be avoided.

6.______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.

7.According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.

8.There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ______________.

9.Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ______________ second, ______________.

10.Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of ______________.

11.It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that ______________.

12.Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.

13.Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like ______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.

14.Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this way.. People swarm to ______________.

15.______________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.

托福大作文寫作技巧

一. 首先要確立論點(diǎn)

托福大作文寫作首先要確立論點(diǎn),確立論點(diǎn)是寫好文章的第一步。不確立論點(diǎn),文章論述就沒有中心和要點(diǎn),也無法展開論述。

二. 寫作之前先構(gòu)思

在開始寫作之前要先構(gòu)思一下,構(gòu)思的主要內(nèi)容包括,文章要寫什么,怎么寫,要舉出什么樣的例子,列舉什么樣的原因。寫作之前盡量給自己一個(gè)短暫的構(gòu)思環(huán)節(jié),時(shí)間把控在3分鐘之內(nèi),不要構(gòu)思太久,不然寫作時(shí)間就不夠了。

三. 列出文章提綱

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