雅思作文怎么描述趨勢
2023-08-01 11:16:43 來源:中國教育在線
同學(xué)們您是否也想知道雅思作文怎么描述趨勢,這個(gè)問題的分析和解答呢?相信你通過以下的文章內(nèi)容就會有更深入的了解,話不多說,接下來就跟著中國教育在線小編一起看看吧。
雅思 作文怎么描述趨勢
雅思小作文主要題型包括圖表、流程、餅圖等,題目任務(wù)是對數(shù)據(jù)和趨勢做描述。那么同學(xué)們知道有哪些句型常用來描述趨勢嗎?下面是小編搜集整理的關(guān)于雅思作文怎么描述趨勢的資料,歡迎查閱。
1) The number increased / rose suddenly / dramatically / rapidly / substantially / considerably / sharply from…to...
2) During 1990-2000, there was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/ sharp considerable rise/boom in the number of private cars from…to…
3) The ten years from 1990 to 2000 witnessed / saw a steady growth of private cars from…to…
4) The number of private cars increased/rose (fell/dropped/declined/decreased) by 20%
5) The number of private cars in 2000 was 5 times more than that in 1990.
6) The number of private cars was roughly/about/approximately doubled/ tripled between 1990 and 2000.
雅思寫作技巧
相信對于同學(xué)們來說,簡單的“淡妝”是難不倒大家的,想要得高分,必須注意結(jié)合“濃妝”,適當(dāng)加入高級的表示方法。
如:中國的出生率從1920年至1935年上升,之后下降到1940年的5%左右。運(yùn)用不同級別的詞匯句式即可寫出如下3種表達(dá)方式:
“淡妝”級別:China’s birth rate rose from 1920 to 1935. It then decreased to 1940at about 5%.(用詞簡單,直接翻譯的簡單句)
“濃抹”級別:China’s birth rate rose from around 10 percent in 1920 to 15 percentin 1935, and then it fell sharply to somewhere at the vicinity of 5 percent in 1940.(用詞調(diào)整的并列句)
考官提供范文中也有類似表達(dá):In spite of some fluctuations in the expected percentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increase in the next twodecades in the three countries.(劍5 P162 Model Answer)
“煙熏妝”級別:Increasing from approximately 10 percent in 1920 to 15 percent in 1935, China’s birth rate then plunged to a low of just 5 percent in 1940.(首先導(dǎo)入分詞伴隨代替常規(guī)的China’s birth rate開頭,且用詞更高深);
建議同學(xué)們可以根據(jù)自己的英語水平,適當(dāng)?shù)奶砑舆@類型的句子,這樣能增加亮點(diǎn),從而提高分?jǐn)?shù)。
當(dāng)然此類句式也能時(shí)常在考官提供的范文中找到:The first potential location is outside the town itself, and is sited just off the main road to the town of Hin don, lying 12 kms to the north-west.(劍5 P166 Model Answer)
通過以上的分析我們可以看出,句子的表達(dá)形式多種多樣,同學(xué)們在自己能力的基礎(chǔ)上運(yùn)用較復(fù)雜的句式更能吸引考官的注意力并取得高分,希望大家在備考時(shí)可以多加練習(xí),靈活運(yùn)用。
雅思作文怎么寫開頭段
在雅思考試中,雅思寫作對于不太擅長邏輯架構(gòu)的大陸考生來說是取得高分的一大門檻,與雅思考試中的其他幾項(xiàng)相比較,寫作往往是得分最低的一項(xiàng)。究竟怎樣才能寫出高分作文,寫作要考察我們的能力比較多,這其中包括文章是否扣題,整體邏輯,詞匯運(yùn)用能力以及語法準(zhǔn)確度等,想要在一個(gè)小時(shí)內(nèi)完成兩篇高質(zhì)量的文章,取得高分著實(shí)不易。雅思考官會喜歡什么樣的開頭段?怎么才能最快速有效地提升自己的寫作分?jǐn)?shù)呢?
除了多積累好的詞匯和句型,多看范文這項(xiàng)工作也是必不可少的。寫作是輸出型考試,輸出的文字質(zhì)量是高是低,與我們平時(shí)輸入多少好的詞、好的句子密切相關(guān)。所以在這里也特別提醒大家,不要一味地埋頭苦寫,從不看范文,從不背好的句子。一味埋頭苦寫無異于只是把自己4分、5分的作文水平練的更加純熟,練成了鋼琴十級跆拳道黑帶而已,一定要多讀范文,多背好的句子,這樣才能真正提高寫作水平。俗話說“熟讀唐詩三百首,不會作詩也會吟”,范文的力量,可見一斑。
我們先來看一道機(jī)經(jīng)真題:
Some people think that government should establish free libraries in each town.
While others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the Internet at home.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
拿到這個(gè)題目,很多同學(xué)寫開頭都陷入了一種典型的模板化形式,筆下的開頭是這樣的:
Nowadays, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, whether government should establish free libraries in each town has sparked much debate. Some people think government should establish free libraries in each town, while others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the Internet at home. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.
不知道有沒有同學(xué)“躺槍”,寫這種開頭的同學(xué),分?jǐn)?shù)絕對不可能高于5.5,整個(gè)開頭幾乎可以說是在“自殺”,除了套模板,就是照搬原題,考官拿到這種開頭是絕對不會有好印象的。那真正好的開頭是什么樣子的呢?我們以劍8的TEST1中劍橋考官的給出的范文為例,來看看考官自己愛怎么寫開頭。先來看一下題目:
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others,however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
考官范文的開頭是這樣的:
A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.
從這篇考官范文的開頭,我們不難看出,它并沒有模式化的“社會背景引入-提出正方觀點(diǎn)-再提出反方觀點(diǎn)-最后陳述自己觀點(diǎn)”,而是只做了兩件事:
一、給核心名詞下定義。
在本文中,即是給child’s education下了個(gè)定義,談了一下在作者看來,child’s education是什么樣的。
二、表明觀點(diǎn)或立場。
在本文中,即闡明孩子的教育問題不僅僅只關(guān)乎家長。所以,好的開頭可以“無模板,但有邏輯?!?/p>
翻翻劍橋雅思考官的范文,我們會發(fā)現(xiàn)很多考官在開頭段都只干了兩件事:下定義+ 表明觀點(diǎn),或者是引出背景+表明觀點(diǎn),還有很多考官范文開頭只是引出背景而已。所以,闡述題目中談及事件的背景才是開頭段應(yīng)該做的,而不是模式化的引出兩方觀點(diǎn)。
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