關(guān)于養(yǎng)老歸屬問(wèn)題的雅思作文范文

　　Some people hold that old people should be taken care at home, while others think they should be placed in old people's house. What is your opinion?

　　有人認(rèn)為老年人應(yīng)該被在家中贍養(yǎng)，另外有些人認(rèn)為他們應(yīng)該被送到養(yǎng)老院，你的觀點(diǎn)是什么？

　　Thanks to the development of medical science, there is an increasing number of elderly people in the world. Some people believe that the seniors should be looked after at home. Indeed, it is the children's responsibility and obligation to take care of their parents when they are old. However, as for me, a better way to ensure them to live a happy life is to send them to the nursing home.

　　First of all, in such retirement homes, aging people can receive intensive medical care from professional doctors. Besides, they can receive a proper diet prepared by dieticians to meet their individual requirements. This is especially good for those old people in poor health. Moreover, they could have regular medical check-ups so that any disease could be diagnosed in its early stages. What is the most beneficial is that if any disease strikes them, medical services are immediately available. Living in nursing homes, they have more opportunities to communicate with their peers. They do not feel lonely and can do a great deal of things together, such as doing morning exercise, playing games, and exchanging memories and stories from their past. On the contrary, if they live at home, they are often left alone when their children and grandchildren are away working or studying.

　　Some people may say that children have duties to take care of their old parents. However, nowadays people are confronted with fierce competition and suffer from great pressure. They are too occupied to spare time for their old parents. There are benefits for children's work and study when nursing homes take over the task of caring for the elderly. Children, free from care, can devote themselves to work or study and achieve more success. Since nursing homes benefit seniors and other family members so much, I believe that old people should be sent to nursing homes.

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　　珠海雅思托福培訓(xùn)學(xué)校資深老師解析：屬于辯論型題目。范文采用一邊倒寫(xiě)法，開(kāi)頭段先用一句話(huà)介紹背景，然后介紹對(duì)方觀點(diǎn)及其理由，然后說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。接下來(lái)三個(gè)理由段，其中第三個(gè)理由段反駁對(duì)方對(duì)自己的攻擊。后一段，重申觀點(diǎn)。

　　隨著醫(yī)學(xué)的發(fā)展，這個(gè)世界上老年人越來(lái)越多，有些人認(rèn)為老年人應(yīng)該在家被照看。確實(shí)，當(dāng)父母老的時(shí)候，照看他們是子女的責(zé)任和義務(wù)。但是我認(rèn)為一個(gè)確保能讓父母快樂(lè)健康的更好方法是把他們送到養(yǎng)老院去。

　　首先，在這種養(yǎng)老院中，老人可以得到專(zhuān)業(yè)醫(yī)生精心的醫(yī)療護(hù)理。此外，他們還可以接受營(yíng)養(yǎng)師準(zhǔn)備的合理膳食來(lái)滿(mǎn)足他們各自的需要。這對(duì)健康情況不好的老人是十分有好處的。而且，他們會(huì)接受定期的身體檢查，這樣就可以使任何疾病在發(fā)展初期就被發(fā)現(xiàn)。有益處的是當(dāng)有任何疾病侵害他們的時(shí)候，可以立刻進(jìn)行醫(yī)療救護(hù)。在養(yǎng)老院里生活，他們有更多的機(jī)會(huì)與同齡人進(jìn)行交流。他們不會(huì)感到孤獨(dú)而且還可以一起做很多事情，比如晨練、玩游戲、一起交流過(guò)去的記憶和故事。相反，如果他們生活在家里，那么當(dāng)孩子或者孫子在外工作或者學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)候，他們就會(huì)感到很孤單?！　∮腥丝赡軙?huì)說(shuō)孩子們有責(zé)任照看他們年老的父母。然而，現(xiàn)在人們面臨激烈的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)，承受巨大的壓力。他們太忙了，不能分出時(shí)間給他們的父母。確實(shí)，當(dāng)養(yǎng)老院接管了看護(hù)老人的工作，對(duì)孩子的工作和學(xué)習(xí)也是有好處的。從看護(hù)中解放出來(lái)的孩子可以對(duì)工作或者學(xué)習(xí)投入得更多，從而取得更大的成功。既然養(yǎng)老院對(duì)年老的人和其他家庭成員都有這么大的益處，那么我認(rèn)為老人應(yīng)該被送到養(yǎng)老院去。