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雅思table作文怎么寫

雅思 table作文怎么寫

雅思大作文寫作一直是雅思考生在備考雅思的過程中比較難攻克的一個部分。下面是小編搜集整理的關(guān)于雅思table作文怎么寫的資料,歡迎查閱。

1.框架

文章形成之初,考生內(nèi)心須生出框架,作為整個文章的支撐。我們將180字的小作文(官方要求數(shù)據(jù)為150字)分為三個部分(當(dāng)然并不等于三個段落):Introduction, Main body and Conclusion。

1). Introduction

首段為介紹段,需要告訴考官整個文章的內(nèi)容,是關(guān)于什么樣的數(shù)據(jù)的表格題,而題目恰恰是告訴我們這個內(nèi)容的,所以最為節(jié)約時間且正確的寫作方法就是對題目進(jìn)行paraphrase。

表格圖可以分為兩種題型:一靜態(tài)圖,僅對數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行表述,不涉及數(shù)據(jù)的變化,以C4T1為例:

TEST 1: The table below shows the proportion of different categoriesof families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Summarise the information byselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

此題僅對數(shù)據(jù)特征進(jìn)行描述,不包含動態(tài)變化過程,所以在對題目進(jìn)行改寫時中心詞為百分比:proportion, percentage, rate and

breakdown。改寫包含兩部分:同義詞替換和句式改寫,目標(biāo)為不能錯過信息點(diǎn),需要所有的信息點(diǎn)完整。以下為改寫后的題目:

The table chart reveals the breakdown of different kinds ofimpoverished families in Australia in 1999.

另一種為數(shù)據(jù)變化圖,涉及數(shù)據(jù)的改變,以C10T2為例:

TEST 2: The table below gives information about sales ofFairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europeancountries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant.

此題目涉及數(shù)據(jù)變化,為動態(tài)表格,所以對數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行描寫時中心詞為change,改寫依然包括同義詞替換和句式改寫,當(dāng)然信息點(diǎn)不可缺少。以下為改寫后的題目:

The charts reveal the change in theamount of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas sold in 5 European countriesduring the period from 1999 to 2004.

2). Main body

主體部分需要對數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行邏輯分析,并不僅僅是對考官羅列的數(shù)據(jù)完全描述。針對于第一種情況,由于不涉及數(shù)據(jù)的變化,我們只需對數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行分類,在分好的類別內(nèi)進(jìn)行對比比較描寫就好。分類的第一步為排序,可根據(jù)需要按照從小到大或從大到小的順序進(jìn)行,若有平均值,則平均值為切入點(diǎn)。若是圖表當(dāng)中給予過多數(shù)據(jù),則須選取主要信息進(jìn)行描寫,主要信息包含:最大值、最小值、特殊關(guān)系的值(half,

double, triple and fourfold)。

第一類:以C4T1為例,如上圖,本表格最后一行為all

households,所有的家庭類別,此為平均值,所以11%為我們的切入點(diǎn)。按照從大到小的順序?qū)⒄麄€表格的數(shù)據(jù)排列出來為:

sole parent; single, no children

couple with children, couple without children

single aged person, aged couple

根據(jù)排列好的數(shù)據(jù),自然而然就將數(shù)據(jù)分成三部分進(jìn)行描述(主體部分為三個段落)。

第二類:以C10T2為例,涉及數(shù)據(jù)變化量

如上圖,本題共有兩個圖表,則每個圖表為主體部分的一個段落。如果按照以上思路,先就每一列進(jìn)行排序描寫,則一個圖中的5個國家都要進(jìn)行兩遍描寫,太過重復(fù),所以針對于有數(shù)據(jù)變化的表格,可就變化量從大到小進(jìn)行排序,則兩個表格分別排序如下:

第一個Table:

UK

Switzerland

Denmark, Sweden

Belgium

第二個Table:

Switzerland, UK

Belgium(上升)

Sweden

Denmark(下降)

排序后分類明顯,圖一根據(jù)變化量的多少可分為四個類別,而圖二根據(jù)上升或下降自然而然分為兩類,這些分類決定了段落句子與句子之間的構(gòu)成。此為主體部分的分析部分,不同的表格題型采取不同的分析方法。

3). Conclusion

結(jié)尾段為總結(jié)總體特征,依然以兩種表格為例。

C4T1不涉及數(shù)據(jù)變化,可以只總結(jié)總體特征,比如說所占比最大的是誰,比例最少的是哪個單項(xiàng),或者將各項(xiàng)分類進(jìn)行對比。

那么本題我們可如此總結(jié):

Overall,the table suggests that households of single adult and those with children weremore likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.

C10T2因涉及數(shù)據(jù)變化,且有兩個圖表,總結(jié)段就需總結(jié)總體特征,即圖一和圖二之間的關(guān)系,本題可如此總結(jié):

Overall,it is clear that sales figures for both products had risen across the board,except for Sweden and Denmark which recorded drops in banana sales during the 5years.

以上為文章的框架,有了框架的支撐才能準(zhǔn)確穩(wěn)定地往里填充內(nèi)容。而從改寫完題目到分析完數(shù)據(jù),大概花費(fèi)考生4~5分鐘的時間。接下來,就是將分析好的數(shù)據(jù)用比較地道的語言表達(dá)出來。

內(nèi)容填充先從句式開始。C4T1因不涉及數(shù)據(jù)變化,在表達(dá)時通常先說明特征,再列舉數(shù)據(jù):

Couplesgenerally tended to be better off, with lower poverty level for couples withoutchildren (7%) than those with children (12%). Older people were generally lesslikely to be poor, though once again the trend favored elderly couples (only 4%)rather than single elderly people (6%).

以上兩個句子,雖然都包含特征和數(shù)據(jù)兩種信息,但卻是兩種句式:簡單句和復(fù)合句。

而數(shù)據(jù)列舉經(jīng)常運(yùn)用的句式還包括:

1). It做形式主語的主語從句:It is noticeable that for both types ofcouples with children, a higher than average proportion were living in povertyat this time.

2).Than用來表對比:

Householdsof single adult and those with children were more likely to be living inpoverty than those consisting of couples.

C10T2因涉及數(shù)據(jù)變化及數(shù)據(jù)對比,常用的為4大句式:

The sales of coffee in UK increasedfrom 1.5 million euros in t999 to 20 million in 2004. The UK experienced anincrease in the sales of coffee from 1.5 million euros in 1999 to 20 million in2004. The 5 years witnessed an increase in the sales of coffee from 1.5 millioneuros in 1999 to 20 million in 2004.There was an increase in the sales ofcoffee from 1.5 million euros in 1999 to 20 million in 2004.

除了此常用句式之外,還有表示對比比較的句式:

Intwo places sales increased by the same small amount: 1.8~2 million euros inDenmark, and 0.8-1 million in Sweden. The increment was slightly larger inBelgium, from 1~1.7 million euros.

以上為常用句式。在句子與句子之間,段落與段落之間加上適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,讓句子之間的關(guān)系更加明確,段落與段落聯(lián)系得更加緊密,這便是一篇符合官方評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的文章了,而整篇文章的表達(dá)時間要控制在15分鐘之內(nèi),這樣考生才可在20分鐘內(nèi)完成一篇邏輯清晰、表達(dá)地道的小作文。

雅思滿分作文語言特點(diǎn)

1 平行結(jié)構(gòu)多

Although I do not support an outright ban on such activities, I do feel that government should restrict or regulate these pursuits.

這句話考官用兩個動詞調(diào)節(jié)語氣,詞匯準(zhǔn)確,而且修辭上頭韻的效果,大家多收集意思相近的動詞,動詞的排列是很體現(xiàn)語言水平的。

Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time

形容詞+名詞的排列,意思上表達(dá)全面,語感上佳。

The variety of sports that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests

名詞的排列特別注意下意思的遞進(jìn)。邏輯全面性的體現(xiàn)。

2 圍繞中心詞寫出長修飾

In fact it would be fair to maintain that if extreme sports were banned, then why not ban any activity which could be interpreted as harmful such as smoking, drinking or even eating junk food?

上海雅思培訓(xùn)老師表示,大家一定要培養(yǎng)賓語的擴(kuò)展能力,寫出中心名詞后,用定語從句進(jìn)行修飾。這是英漢之間語言的大區(qū)別。英語是先給中心詞,后面加上修飾。中文習(xí)慣定語放在名詞的前面。文中中心詞是activity,后面是拓展部分。

3 謂語動詞多樣化處理

Rather than banning these sports, governments should ensure that companies who provide facilities for dangerous sports meet the required legal safety standards.

多個謂語動詞處理有兩種方式,一個是連接詞銜接,動詞原形排列,一個非謂語表達(dá)(to do/doing/done)體現(xiàn)多樣性。但是,大家一定要注意非謂語的排列順序會有邏輯效果,所以要格外嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。

we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of the screen every evening.

非謂語表達(dá)強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)果的邏輯。

4 插入語多見

If, for example, an individual decided to go parachute jumping, then the authorities should insist that he or she undergo sufficient training and supervision and, if necessary, obtain the legally required license

插入語是有難度的手藝,需要有積累,位置擺的要有講究。既要考慮語法,又要兼顧意思。需要長期練習(xí)。

5 狀語處理

介詞是英語的靈魂,介詞引導(dǎo)狀語是考官的慣用手段。介詞的搭配和位置是英語寫作的重點(diǎn)難點(diǎn),一個人對于介詞的駕馭直接體現(xiàn)語言水平。狀語可以豐富句意,意思上更加全面。這是語言嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)性,邏輯性的直接體現(xiàn)。主要是時間,地點(diǎn),方式,條件,目的等等。

One problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.(伴隨狀語)

If there were easy-to

reach local sports centers, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of the screen every evening.(地點(diǎn)狀語)

This has the added benefit the parents and children often use them together just for fun which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.(at時間狀語細(xì)節(jié)展示)

As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health.(as引導(dǎo)原因狀語)

6概念到具體的過程

The variety of spors that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch.

細(xì)節(jié)化的展示是雅思作文的特點(diǎn)。從抽象到具體,從概括到細(xì)節(jié)。大家要學(xué)會這種演繹法的思路。

Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local counsel has done.

雅思寫作7分與5分表達(dá)的區(qū)別

以同一個句子三種表達(dá)為例大家琢磨琢磨吧:

1. Interestingly, the newer metro systems are much shorter than the older ones.

2. It is interesting to note that the more recently established metro systems are far shorter than the older ones .

3. One interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the more recently established systems are considerably shorter than the older ones.

再來三句:

1. It is also important to note that more girls go to high school in all parts of the world except East Asia.

2. It is also worth noting that females are more likely to attend second school in all regions except East Asia.

3. Also noteworthy is the fact that females are more likely to receive a secondary education in all regions except East Asia.

以上是雅思寫作5分句式和和7分句式的區(qū)別。通過上面的例子,大家就可以看到,在句式的表達(dá)上,雅思寫作5分和7分之間不僅僅是詞匯的區(qū)別,更有語法和結(jié)構(gòu)上的不同。所以大家在備考雅思寫作的時候向著7分努力吧。

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