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雅思寫作高分不可錯過的方法

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雅思寫作高分不可錯過的方法

雅思寫作高分不可錯過的方法

1、以人為本法

無論是哪一類的作文題目幾乎都是離不開人的,一般我們在支持一個觀點(diǎn)時是因?yàn)槟敲醋鰧θ说暮锰幐?。那么你知道人的需求有哪些呢?身體上(健康)vs心理上(安全,求知,自信,被尊重等);物質(zhì)上(物質(zhì)離不開經(jīng)濟(jì))vs 精神上(文化娛樂)。

2、具體分類法

有一些作文題目真的是很泛的,那么在看完題目后我們可以思考為:it depends.

在某些特定具體的情況下我是支持正方的;而在另一些特定情況下我則支持反方。

3、核心詞匯法

一般有很多的題目中涉及的因素是很多的,而且各個因素的關(guān)系都比較復(fù)雜。這種類型的題目看起來難其實(shí)是很容易的,我們可以先把題目中的核心詞匯抽出來,去思考發(fā)現(xiàn)他們各自的本質(zhì)特點(diǎn),以此來獲得眾多的思路以及論據(jù)。

一般你可以例舉我們小的時候?qū)W習(xí)英語的事情,比如可以說要想長大后可以到外國去玩,哪我們就需要有很好的英語水平作為鋪墊,詳細(xì)點(diǎn)就是我們先要每天晚上不斷的背單詞和語法,不可以偷懶,只有這樣將來才能學(xué)好英語,學(xué)好英語才能找到好的工作,這樣才有機(jī)會到處去外國玩。

雅思寫作開頭段別這樣寫

開頭一:中式英文,人見人暈

典型失敗案例:

Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life.

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

開頭二:廢話連篇不知所云

典型失敗案例:

Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

修改方案:開門見山,直奔主題

In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.

Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真題)

Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

開頭三:觀點(diǎn)模糊,態(tài)度曖昧

典型失敗案例:

Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

開頭四:偏離主題,無軌電車

典型失敗案例:

Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

開頭五:語法錯誤,慘不忍睹

典型失敗案例:

Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真題)

About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

開頭六:過分簡單,沒有重點(diǎn)

典型失敗案例:

Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

開頭七:用詞不當(dāng),表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)

典型失敗案例:

Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

開頭八:意思重復(fù),原地踏步

典型失敗案例:

Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

開頭九: 觀點(diǎn)武斷,態(tài)度強(qiáng)硬

典型失敗案例:

Topic1-The importance of confidence

In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

開頭十:中國俗語,胡亂翻譯

典型失敗案例:

Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

正確說法:Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole…

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

雅思作文的高頻句型

1. It is necessary to develop the tourist trade, for it contributes a lot

to increasing understanding between nations.有必要發(fā)展旅游產(chǎn)業(yè)促進(jìn)不同國家了解。

2.As the saying goes, “ Seeing is believing.” Only a trip to an unfamiliar

land can help us understand the people and culture there.只有一次旅行不能夠使人了解文化和人民

3.Since tourism helps increase understanding between people, it will

finally wipe out prejudice against other nations, and make the world a more

peaceful one.旅游增加不同人了解,利于消除偏見促進(jìn)和平

4.Tourism contributes significantly to marry countries’ GNP( Gross National

Product). The economy of some nations is based on the tourist

industry.旅游顯著促進(jìn)GNP,很多國家依附于旅游業(yè)

5.Tourism helps develop a nation’s commerce because tourists are most

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