雅思大作文怎么寫得多

雅思大作文怎么寫得多，很多同學(xué)對于這個問題有疑問和不解，那么下面就跟著中國教育在線的小編詳細(xì)了解一下吧。

雅思 大作文怎么寫得多

雅思寫作對作文的字?jǐn)?shù)要求是很嚴(yán)格的，小作文不少于150字，大作文不少于250個字。作文要求只給了下限，很多烤鴨就覺得，寫多一些就可以了。下面是小編搜集整理的關(guān)于雅思大作文怎么寫得多的資料，歡迎查閱。

1 有邏輯有條理地組織論點(diǎn)

一篇文章只有一個立場，但是論點(diǎn)可以有幾個。那么這幾個論點(diǎn)如何排列，哪個在前哪個在后呢?這些是有講究的，同學(xué)們不能想到哪寫哪兒。下面的段落是學(xué)生的例文，其中就存在論點(diǎn)排列的問題

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under no control, it will be terrible, because young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours, and the information online can be good and bad as well. If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. So, studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.

這段文字的中心內(nèi)容是網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)存在的問題。論點(diǎn)包括兩個，學(xué)生的自律和網(wǎng)絡(luò)的內(nèi)容。關(guān)于學(xué)生自律的問題有兩句話，young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours,以及 If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day.這兩句話有相關(guān)性，但是卻被網(wǎng)絡(luò)那句話隔開了。這樣會給讀者造成閱讀的障礙，降低文章的流暢度。所以重新調(diào)整這幾句話的位置，就可以很快解決這個問題。

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under no control, it will be terrible. Young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours. If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. And the information online can be good and bad as well. So, studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.

2 連接手段使用得自然多樣

論點(diǎn)之間如何連接?有哪些連接手段?下面這個段落的中心內(nèi)容是看電視太多產(chǎn)生的問題，共有三個論點(diǎn)。所使用的連接手段是正確有效的，但是單一，少變化。每一個論點(diǎn)之間都使用了副詞做連接詞，而且都是在句首。

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems. Firstly, it is bad for children’s health. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weak body. Secondly, if children spend too much time watching TV, they would have less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to their feeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Last but not least, watching TV too long, children may become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactive activity by many researches.

下面的段落是對照版本。其中使用了代詞，副詞和形容詞等多種連接手段，而且做到了自然銜接：

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems and the most obvious one is the negative impact on physical health of children. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weak body.Another concern is about social development of children. If they spend too much time watching TV, they would have less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to their feeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Children watching TV too long may also become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactive activity by many researches.

3 段落的中心內(nèi)容與中心句

一個段落只有一個中心思想，這個中心思想通常會體現(xiàn)在一個總結(jié)性的句子當(dāng)中，這句話叫做中心句。中心句在學(xué)術(shù)文章中常常落在段首，以方便閱讀。中心句如同射擊的靶子，要直指文章主題，這樣后面的論點(diǎn)才不會偏離題目，因此非常重要。上面關(guān)于看電視太多的段落，中心句就寫的非常明確。下面再給同學(xué)們一些句子，可以靈活應(yīng)用于立論段，即證明自己觀點(diǎn)的段落。

It is hard to argue with the fact that workers are the direct/ first beneficiaries of this working fashion.

There is no doubt that many employees would favour/welcome telework.

Statistics show that there are few things which impact the human mind more than mass media.

The mass media hold a large share of importance in society.

A life without the presence of mass media would seem improbable for many.

However, this does not mean that …

下面是一些可以用于讓步段的中心句：

there are certainly some minor downsides in …

I admit that … is not perfect.

I understand why some people oppose…

Of course there are some opposite voices against…

the disapproving voices also sound reasonable.

It is natural to regard a university as a phase preparing for a future job…

the other side of the argument is also valid.

Surely pushing their children towards academic study makes sense for parents.

You cannot be honest without admitting…

4 指示代詞的準(zhǔn)確使用

中文和英文在指示代詞上有較大的區(qū)別。中文習(xí)慣重復(fù)名詞，而英文則強(qiáng)調(diào)用代詞。如‘我今天把錢包丟了，我那個錢包可好看了?！鄬?yīng)的英文表達(dá)是使用代詞而不再重復(fù)錢包這個名詞， ‘I lost my purse today, and it was so cute.’ 或者 ‘I lost my purse, which was so cute.’流暢度高的文章指示代詞使用正確，指向清楚。下面這兩句話當(dāng)中有兩個代詞it，但是存在指代不清的問題：

Government’s investment is always the focus that people pay more attention to. Recently, itbecomes a controversy that whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions.

前一個it指代后面whether從句，后一個it指代government.為了理清關(guān)系，減少模糊，最好不用形式主語這個句型，而是直接把主語從句放在主語的位置上。修改如下：

Government’s budget is always the attention focus of the public. Whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions causes controversy.

雅思寫作經(jīng)典句型

(1) It deserves /merits our attention that

(2) Notably / Noticeably ，It is noticeable/ notable/manifest / evident that

(3) It is advisable/ suggested that+學(xué)生應(yīng)該需要學(xué)習(xí)音樂和體育，

(4) It is a well-established fact that +句子 ，It is universally acknowledged that + 句子

(5)Ample / rich /countless evidence propels me to consider that +句子

(6)Both empirical experience and Academic knowledge enables me to argue that

(7)It is far from inconceivable / incomprehensible that+句子

(8) The role of sth cannot be underemphasized/ignored / overlooked. ( 總結(jié)句)　什么的作用是不容小視/忽略/忽視。

The role of practical subjects，such as marketing and creative writing，cannot be underemphasized.

(9)With the help of sb / sth ，+句子. Without xxxx，sb would never，never have done sth　(重要性)

With the help of mobile phones，businessmen can easily communicate with clients around the world. Without these technological gadgets， they will never， never have reaped so much material wealth

借助于xxxx的幫助，某人能怎么樣

With the help of study about history，many students are able to sharpen their analysis skill. Without it，students would never have achieved a superb leap in academic ability.

如何寫出一篇不低于6分的雅思作文

步驟一：審題，找出題目的要求，從而完成評分描述“TaskAchievement” 第一條 therequirements of the task (<2分鐘)

具體來看：閱讀文字部分shows后面信息，找出題目的topic, time,place。閱讀圖表的標(biāo)題、橫軸與縱軸的文字信息，尤其注意縱軸單位、圖標(biāo)內(nèi)的對象所包含的文字信息。

步驟二：觀察數(shù)據(jù)，找出主要特征和能證明這些特征的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)。 (<3分鐘)表格題和柱狀圖這些多數(shù)據(jù)的圖表出現(xiàn)頻率相當(dāng)高，怎樣根據(jù)數(shù)據(jù)的異同來對繁多的數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行有效分類，并歸納出每一類別的共性，成了當(dāng)前評判作文能否在“TaskAchievement”進(jìn)入6分的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。

步驟三：文章撰寫 (15分鐘左右)當(dāng)前小作文的寫作常用大綱：題目改寫(引出topic)，對象分類(表明寫作思路);重申主要特征：或指出某個未提及的特點(diǎn)。

步驟四：檢查(1分鐘)

此時(shí)，不宜做大的修改，把筆誤的部分改掉即可。一般語言水平在大學(xué)四級左右的考生，根據(jù)本文的步驟，重點(diǎn)關(guān)注第一第二步，必能在考試中取得至少6分的佳績。

雅思寫作語法的易錯點(diǎn)

第一易錯點(diǎn)

Government claims that teacher should teach student some self-protection skills.

錯誤分析：可數(shù)名詞不可“裸用”。

在正式英文寫作里，凡是常規(guī)的可數(shù)名詞，必須在前面有限定詞，比如冠詞a/an/the，物主代詞my/their/your等等，指示代詞this/that等等。否則，這個可數(shù)名詞就必須用復(fù)數(shù)。而在這個句子中g(shù)overnment要么用the government，要么用government，后面的teacher和student都一樣要加上復(fù)數(shù)。

因此，這個句子要改成：The government claims that teachers should teach students some self-protection skills.

第二易錯點(diǎn)

Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.

錯誤分析：英語中動詞原形是不能作主語的。

而且在這個句子中如果work做了動詞，后面can enhance也是動詞，就出現(xiàn)雙謂語的情況，因此把work改成working.

因此，這個句子要改成：Working at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.

第三易錯點(diǎn)

Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.

錯誤分析：詞性使用錯誤。

different的詞性為形容詞，而修飾形容詞或者動詞的時(shí)候應(yīng)該用副詞。

因此，這個句子要改成：Intelligent students should not be treated differently by their teachers.

第四易錯點(diǎn)

A lot of houses were collapsedin the earthquake.

錯誤分析：句中出現(xiàn)雙謂語。

句中collapse已經(jīng)為動詞，再加be動詞之后就變成了被動結(jié)構(gòu)，此處be純屬多余。

因此，這個句子要改成：A lot of housescollapsedin the earthquake.

第五易錯點(diǎn)

Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.

錯誤分析：當(dāng)我們用到代詞的時(shí)候，就一定要看所指代的名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)，根據(jù)名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)來使用相應(yīng)的代詞。

因此，這個句子要改成：Some parents do not obey traffic rules themselves.

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