雅思作文怎么練到5.5

雅思作文怎么練到5.5，很多同學(xué)對(duì)于這個(gè)問題有疑問和不解，那么下面就跟著中國(guó)教育在線的小編詳細(xì)了解一下吧。

雅思 作文怎么練到5.5

寫作可能是雅思考試中較難的一項(xiàng)，這個(gè)難主要是針對(duì)想要拿高分的同學(xué)，因?yàn)樗幌裱潘悸犃蛘唛喿x那樣，突破一兩個(gè)月就可以有比較明顯的突飛猛進(jìn)，相反，寫作是一個(gè)需要長(zhǎng)期積累的過(guò)程。下面是小編搜集整理的關(guān)于雅思作文怎么練到5.5的資料，歡迎查閱。

我們以這個(gè)雅思題目為例：

Some groups of people benefit tremendously from modern communication technology，but some others think it is not beneficial to them at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

有一些人認(rèn)為，從現(xiàn)代通訊技術(shù)可以獲得巨大的好處,但也有一些人認(rèn)為這并不有利于他們。你是同意還是反對(duì)呢?

就這個(gè)題目，我們先來(lái)分析一位學(xué)生的5.5分雅思作文：

第1段： With the widespread use of the Internet and technological progression, it is more easier to contact each other. Some people profit from modern communication technology,especially who are far apart from each other ,while others do not. From where I stand, there are some people can not enjoy the benefit from convenient communication in the information age.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：作為開頭段，本段思路是不錯(cuò)的，但是需要做如下修改：(1)progression - progress; (2) More easier - much easier; (3) especially who are far... - especially those who are far...; (4) there are some people cannot enjoy - some people cannot enjoy / there are some people who cannot enjoy; (5) 根據(jù)后文，增加了because of poverty and their age，開頭段直接點(diǎn)出后面要論述的主題，增加文章的連貫性。

第2段：To start with, people in remote area or impoverished countries where they still stay in touch with each other by letter or telegram could not enjoy the convenience from advanced communication techniques. They are not well-informed about the progress of those modern technologies owing to the limited news resources. In addition, many remote regions still do not have access to mobile phone coverage and the Internet. Because the local governments may not afford the fee in terms of the high cost of building some communication base station and burying optical fiber.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本段寫得不錯(cuò)，如果這篇雅思作文的全文都能寫到這個(gè)水平，6.5-7分都有可能，但存在問題：(1) may not afford不是一個(gè)常見的搭配，應(yīng)該是cannot afford; (2) 通訊站，光纖之類可用communication infrastructure來(lái)統(tǒng)稱，其中infrastructure的意思是“基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施”。

第3段：We can not deny the fact that that modern means of communication have became an indispensable part in people’s lives due to their merits. Email, smart phone, instant messaging programme (like Wechat,Line) and social networking websites (Twitter,Facebook) have greatly improved the efficiency and effectiveness of long-distance for many people. With signal covering, they enable people to contact with friends and family members wherever and whenever possible .Moreover, modern communication technology has lowered the costs of communicating. However, some people ,especially the elder, do not profit from the development of communication technology. It is of great difficulties for them to learn how to use email or instant messaging APP. Accordingly , the elder still utilize relatively original means of communication, like telephone and mails.

本段問題最大，尤其是思路。本段論證“老年人無(wú)法享受現(xiàn)代通訊科技”，但本段前面一大段都在講現(xiàn)代科技的優(yōu)勢(shì)所在，這是離題的。應(yīng)該一開始就像第二段那樣提出主題句，然后展開論證，即為什么老年人無(wú)法享受通訊科技。修改文提出了兩個(gè)原因，一是他們習(xí)慣了傳統(tǒng)方法，二是他們學(xué)不會(huì)現(xiàn)代設(shè)備，然后舉爺爺為例，他不認(rèn)識(shí)羅馬字母，因此無(wú)法使用現(xiàn)代通訊科技。這樣論證很清楚，很清晰。

第4段： To conclude, I would concede that modern communication technology enable tons of people to enjoy the convenience. Despite that, some people , including people in remote areas and the elder, are not beneficial from these. Over all, I am convinced that government should provide funds for remote region to develop accesses to the Internet and mobile phone coverage. Also the media is supposed to popularize the advanced communication technology for the elder.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：結(jié)尾段思路不錯(cuò)，僅有幾個(gè)用詞小錯(cuò)誤。

經(jīng)修改后的雅思作文：

With the widespread use of the Internet and technological progress, it is much easier to contact each other. Some people profit from modern communication technology, especially those who are far apart from each other, while others do not. From where I stand, I do find some people can not enjoy the benefit from convenient communication in the information age because of poverty or their age.

To start with, people in remote area or impoverished countries where they still stay in touch with each other by letter or telegram could not enjoy the convenience from advanced communication techniques. They are not well-informed about the progress of those modern technologies owing to the limited news resources. In addition, many remote regions still do not have access to the Internet connection, because the local governments cannot afford the high cost of building the Internet and communication infrastructure such as the optical fiber.

Furthermore, the elderly people also find that they can hardly benefit from the modern communication technology. They have been so used to the traditional ways of communication that some of them can never adjust themselves to the new methods. There are also some old people who find that they simply cannot learn how to use email or instant messaging APPs, though to the young, these are really simple applications. My grandpa is an example. His inability to recognize Roman letters makes it impossible for him to use any of these convenient means of communication.

To conclude, modern communication technology enables many people to enjoy its conveniences. Despite that, some people , including people in remote areas and the elder, are not benefited from these. Over all, I am convinced that government should provide funds for remote region to develop accesses to the Internet connection. Also the media is supposed to popularize the advanced communication technology to the elderly. (307 words)

使用雅思作文模板的注意事項(xiàng)

一、語(yǔ)言能力很低，文法基本上是不通的，詞匯量同樣是很有限，寫作目標(biāo)分?jǐn)?shù)在5分。此類學(xué)生最想的是通過(guò)背誦幾篇范文便可以在考試時(shí)混個(gè)5分。但是大部分時(shí)候，卻都是事與愿違，有一些學(xué)生日夜苦背，已經(jīng)積累了十多篇文章，最后依然是連5分都未到。 這類學(xué)生最大的問題有兩個(gè)：不能獨(dú)立地寫出一句完整正確的單句并且考試看不懂題目。

二、有可以用在簡(jiǎn)單溝通的詞匯量，還可以去撰寫常見句式，單句撰寫熟練。寫作目標(biāo)分?jǐn)?shù)在6分。此類學(xué)生成為了現(xiàn)在人數(shù)最多的，通常在突六和精六班級(jí)。這一類學(xué)生有很大的學(xué)習(xí)潛力，在審題還沒有大的差錯(cuò)時(shí)，通常得分5分到5.5?之間。此類學(xué)生在自己閱讀范文時(shí)，都愛去喜歡積累難詞和復(fù)雜句式，而有一些學(xué)生在考試時(shí)太過(guò)的傾向在用生僻詞匯，長(zhǎng)句能夠?qū)?到5行，甚至一段一句。這些學(xué)生普遍存在的問題是論證能力差，扣題不緊，對(duì)句子功能的把握不強(qiáng)。 建議：在老師的指導(dǎo)下，批判式的學(xué)習(xí)范文，在積累詞匯和句式的基礎(chǔ)上，重點(diǎn)把握句子的功能以及主體段論證的展開。關(guān)注審題的精確性和相關(guān)主題的論證材料積累。句式長(zhǎng)短句合理使用，不宜寫過(guò)長(zhǎng)句子，絕不能出現(xiàn)一段一句的情況。

三、有很扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底的考生，寫作目標(biāo)分?jǐn)?shù)在7分或以上成績(jī)。 可以去選擇不同種類題型的范文簡(jiǎn)單閱讀就行了。根本是完全沒必要再去研讀范文，要不然只會(huì)誤導(dǎo)自己。

雅思寫作時(shí)怎么避免考試的常見錯(cuò)誤

很多同學(xué)最愛用的高頻句式，也是從小接觸英語(yǔ)最開始的句型there be，可以說(shuō)是人見人愛，在各種話題，大小作文中都通用的結(jié)構(gòu)，可是，它也是很多同學(xué)經(jīng)常不注意就出錯(cuò)的陷阱地方。

比如說(shuō)，我們想表達(dá)“有好幾個(gè)原因?qū)е铝诉@個(gè)結(jié)果?！比绻凑兆置娴囊馑贾苯臃g，很容易寫成“There are several reasons lead to the result.”這樣的句子。

這樣一來(lái)，我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，這個(gè)句子中出現(xiàn)了雙謂語(yǔ)： are和 lead這種錯(cuò)誤，我們可以通過(guò)提醒自己，在寫there be句型時(shí)，be動(dòng)詞部分保持主謂一致，但其他的行為的描述我們?nèi)懛侵^語(yǔ)或者從句。

也就是說(shuō)，剛才錯(cuò)誤的句子我們可以改成There are several reasons leading to the result. 或者There are several reasons which lead to the result.大家可以立刻嘗試下，結(jié)合非謂語(yǔ)或者從句翻譯下面的句子：“有一些公司允許員工在家工作。”

除了雙謂語(yǔ)的這樣的高頻錯(cuò)誤外，很多同學(xué)在處理中文想說(shuō)的比較長(zhǎng)難的句子時(shí)候，也會(huì)因?yàn)橹苯臃g，而反映出中式英語(yǔ)或者很多語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，我們來(lái)看一個(gè)例子?！霸谏钪谐霈F(xiàn)的問題可以解決，對(duì)未來(lái)有可能出現(xiàn)的麻煩進(jìn)行規(guī)避?！蹦銜?huì)怎么寫這句話呢?

曾經(jīng)有同學(xué)寫出過(guò) “Life problems can solve, future trouble can prevent.”這樣的翻譯版本。各位同學(xué)如果仔細(xì)挑一挑錯(cuò)誤，會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，一個(gè)句子中出現(xiàn)了雙主語(yǔ)，雙謂語(yǔ)。那么，解決辦法最簡(jiǎn)單的是把逗號(hào)變句號(hào)，寫成兩句話?；蛘哌M(jìn)行相關(guān)的連接詞的銜接，比如此句中可以加and來(lái)連接兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句。

除了這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤外，我們還會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，問題自己怎么解決啊?麻煩自己怎么預(yù)防啊?所以，這種中文說(shuō)起來(lái)像主動(dòng)，但是在英語(yǔ)表達(dá)中我們實(shí)際上需要被動(dòng)的翻譯，是大家要去多注意和檢查的陷阱地方。如果對(duì)應(yīng)中文直接翻譯，就出現(xiàn)了多動(dòng)詞，語(yǔ)態(tài)不合理的問題了。

所以這個(gè)句子應(yīng)該改成Problems in life can be solved and trouble in future may be prevented.

關(guān)于“雅思作文怎么練到5.5”以及相關(guān)內(nèi)容，這篇文章中國(guó)教育在線小編先介紹到這里了，如果你還想關(guān)注更多，那么可以繼續(xù)接著關(guān)注其他文章了解。

>> 雅思 托福 免費(fèi)測(cè)試、量身規(guī)劃、讓英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)不再困難<<