雅思G類(lèi)大作文考題分析：體育比賽如足球是否可以促進(jìn)文化交流

雅思G類(lèi)大作文考題分析：體育比賽如足球是否可以促進(jìn)文化交流，很多同學(xué)對(duì)于這個(gè)問(wèn)題有疑問(wèn)和不解，那么下面就跟著中國(guó)教育在線(xiàn)的小編詳細(xì)了解一下吧。

Some people think that competitive sports such as soccer can help to reach culture interaction among people of different age groups and nationalities，but others think that it would cause problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

2018年北美考區(qū)的類(lèi)似考題回憶為：

Some people think that international competitive sports such as football bring conflict between people of different age groups and nationalities. Others think sport is helping reach understanding between people and nations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

由于反饋信息較少，上述回憶與實(shí)際真題存在偏差，以下分析和范文僅供參考。

審 題：這道題比較長(zhǎng)，很多考生可能一看到體育比賽，就想到體育類(lèi)的高頻考題辦體育賽事的好壞，如果就此急于下筆，TR很難高分，一定要認(rèn)真、充分讀題，看清楚題目的觀(guān)點(diǎn)及重點(diǎn)是什么，再結(jié)合自己積累的背景知識(shí)開(kāi)始構(gòu)思。

題中觀(guān)點(diǎn)一是競(jìng)技體育比賽比如足球可以幫助不同年齡群體和國(guó)籍的人交流文化，信息量比較大。雖然主干是體育比賽促進(jìn)文化交流，但要想TR高分，在構(gòu)思和論述是要提到和圍繞足球不同年齡群體和國(guó)籍等補(bǔ)充和限定要素。

題中觀(guān)點(diǎn)二是競(jìng)技體育比賽會(huì)導(dǎo)致問(wèn)題，沒(méi)有明確說(shuō)明問(wèn)題，但從DG類(lèi)考題的一般規(guī)律來(lái)看，應(yīng)該是說(shuō)會(huì)導(dǎo)致與前一個(gè)觀(guān)點(diǎn)相反的問(wèn)題，如矛盾沖突之類(lèi)。如果泛寫(xiě)這類(lèi)賽事的問(wèn)題，TR難高分。

結(jié) 構(gòu)：四段式，開(kāi)頭段改寫(xiě)題目并簡(jiǎn)介個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)，2個(gè)主體段分別討論一個(gè)觀(guān)點(diǎn)，結(jié)尾概括全文并重申個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)。

這道題的難點(diǎn)在于不容易實(shí)現(xiàn)論述的充分和具體。多數(shù)考生會(huì)因?yàn)槿狈ο嚓P(guān)的例子積累而陷于反復(fù)講道理，導(dǎo)致TR和LR不理想。以下范文里的例子可以參考。

Sample Answer：

以下范文及批改意見(jiàn)來(lái)自國(guó)外雅思學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)站eltecenglish，評(píng)分不詳，僅供參考。原文可點(diǎn)擊頁(yè)面左下方閱讀原文查看。

注：范文題目與本次考試題目有出入，有顏色的部分為批改意見(jiàn)，藍(lán)色為增加或改正，紅色為說(shuō)明，劃線(xiàn)為刪除。

While some people believe that sports competitions between nations help to bring different people and culture together as they get to travel and learn about the place where the events are organized, others opine that it creates problems and increases the chance of confrontations between countries because people tend to get over excited during matches. I agree with the former view.

網(wǎng)站評(píng)語(yǔ)：開(kāi)頭段寫(xiě)的很好。

補(bǔ)充：這個(gè)開(kāi)頭段改寫(xiě)較為充分（從原因角度做了拓展），個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)簡(jiǎn)潔，但傾向這樣的寫(xiě)法：People have different views about the effects of sports competitions. While some argue that these games would cause conflicts between people and even nations, I believe that international sports events can promote culture understanding in most cases.

On the one hand, (改為I strongly support the view that) it is thought that a sport allows fans to understand a new culture and get along with people of other nations.This is to say that(不必要，刪除) during big sports events such as Olympics, Wimbledon, and Commonwealth games World cups of various sports (such as 是用來(lái)舉例的，它引出的內(nèi)容不能是概括的various sports，要更具體，改為溫網(wǎng)和英聯(lián)邦運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)), host countries allow people of different nationalities to come and witness the spectacular event. This gives them a chance to travelers from various parts of the world to (刪掉這些，改成them來(lái)指代前文提到的不同國(guó)家的人，CC更好) experience the culture of the host nation during the stay. This strengthens the relationship among nations. For instance, in every Olympics, millions of people come to the host country. This eventually helps in improving the ties among nations. (這不是個(gè)例子，例子要包含名字、數(shù)據(jù)、事實(shí)之類(lèi)的信息，而這句話(huà)只是在改述前文表達(dá)過(guò)的意思，改為后文藍(lán)色部分）For example, during the Asian Games in Jakarta in 2018, millions of people and thousands of sportspersons from different countries visited Indonesia. This not only gave these people a better understanding of the Indonesian culture but also forged close friendships irrespective of religious and racial backgrounds.

網(wǎng)站評(píng)語(yǔ)：目標(biāo)是高分的話(huà)，論述一定要具體。

補(bǔ)充：上述批改關(guān)于什么是例子的解釋和舉例值得學(xué)習(xí)，目標(biāo)7+尤其要注意。例子需要有具體的地名、人名、企業(yè)名稱(chēng)、數(shù)據(jù)之類(lèi)，而不是想法或假設(shè)。

On the other hand, sports often lead to violence because people often (之前已經(jīng)出現(xiàn)了often，重復(fù)，刪除 take sports them too seriously. In other words, (不必要的連接詞，刪除) many fans are passionate about games such as football, and cricket, and it is sometimes hard for them to digest the defeat of their team. The fans ofthe losing team, out of anger, often engage in serious brawls with the fans of different other countries and, sometimes, at worse, damage public property. For example, during 2016 Union of European Football Associations (UEFA) in France, after the Russian team was knocked out of the competition,their itsfans had (時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤) damaged public property in France and engaged in public fighting. After this incident, the France French government banned Russian citizens from entering their land the country and this had (時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤) raised tension between these two nations.

補(bǔ)充：這一段修改后在四項(xiàng)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的表現(xiàn)都不錯(cuò)，大家可以體會(huì)一下行文流暢，同時(shí)積累詞匯、短語(yǔ)和例子。

In conclusion, although sports result in tension among nations because of the outrage of certain emotional fans, I believe that sports they allow people to experience a different culture and place.

為方便閱讀和學(xué)習(xí)，調(diào)整范文如下：

People have different views about the effects of sports competitions. While some argue that these games would cause conflicts between people and even nations, I believe that international sports events can promote culture understanding among sport fans.

Sports sometimes lead to violence because people take them too seriously. Many fans are so passionate about games that it feels hard for them to digest the defeat of their team. The fans of the losing team, no matter how old they are, might engage in serious brawls with the fans of other countries and cause devastating consequences. For example, some Russia fans threw bottles and chairs to others after Russia were knocked out of the 2016 Union of European Football Associations in France, which resulted in French government banning Russian citizens from entering the country as well as the raised tension between the two nations.

However, I strongly support the view that a sport allows fans of different ages and countries to understand new cultures. Big sports events such as Olympics, Wimbledon, and Commonwealth games, give people a chance to experience the culture of the host nation and to communicate with local residents. This strengthens the relationship among nations. For example, during the Asian Games in Jakarta in 2018, millions of people and thousands of sportspersons from different countries visited Indonesia. This not only gave these people a better understanding of the Indonesian culture but also forged close friendships irrespective of religious and racial backgrounds.

In conclusion, although sports result in tension among nations because of the outrage of certain emotional fans, I believe that they allow people from different backgrounds to learn more about each other.

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