雅思大作文平均工作時間更長的國家更成功寫作思路及范文

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觀點類大作文，社會類話題

Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

題目來源：2013年9月12日亞太雅思大作文

一、題目大意

平均工作時長更長的國家會比那些沒有很長工作時長的國家經(jīng)濟發(fā)展更成功。你是否同意?

二、關(guān)鍵詞

economically successful 經(jīng)濟更加成功，這個成功的概念要去被定義。

average working time 平均工作時長

三、寫作思路解析

工作時長的長短和經(jīng)濟成功度沒有直接關(guān)系，那些有著更長工作時長的國家也不一定比那些沒有很長工作時長的國家經(jīng)濟發(fā)展更成功：

1.工作時長和經(jīng)濟成功沒有直接關(guān)系：經(jīng)濟成功的主要決定因素太過復雜，不可能由一個單一而且并不直觀的指標來反映出來。一方面經(jīng)濟成功取決于其產(chǎn)業(yè)發(fā)達程度，另一方面，工作時長的長短可能反應了勞動力的發(fā)達程度：有些國家的工作時長長的原因恰恰是因為工作效率不如那些技術(shù)指向性的國家，而這也恰恰證明了時長和國家經(jīng)濟成功度無關(guān)

2.經(jīng)濟方面的成功度本身也很難比較，因為很難找到一個可信服的評價標準：對于經(jīng)濟水平的測量方式站在不同立場上有所不同，因而也就很難從宏觀上客觀評定哪個國家的經(jīng)濟更加成功。

四、提綱梳理見下

五、高分寫作示范

I would argue in this essay that there is no necessary correlation between the average working time of a country and the economic success level of it and the irrationalities of the comparison made in this topic.

The economic standard of different nations and their working hours of labor forces are not proportional at all; the true reason lying behind the working time and the multiple factors leading to economic development compel the claim to be ridiculous. Before deciding whether an element contributes to an outcome, one should first see past the truth causing the elementon some cases, the long working time in a country may directly reflect the fact that its labor forces may be not as developed as that in other countries. That means they have to increase their working hours because they are not as efficient as those who are technologically prosperous in terms of the productivity. Such situation explains why time length cannot be a measurement in judging the economic success. Whereas the booming of the economy is also decided by many other cruxes like market-oriented industry, good transportation and the performance of securities, etc.; they are much more directly linked with the money flows and commercial situations and countries depend these types of factors more to develop their financial conditions no matter how long their citizens are working during their vocational life.

Before scrutinizing whether countries with or without long average working time can be compared in terms of their economic success, we must admit that it is not doable. For any appraisal to happen, one must first define the parameter in order to make a system of differentiation. Just what is the quantifying standard we consider to judge the economic successfulness of a country? Are we measuring the total GDP or per-capital GDP of a nation? Or are we verifying the CPI, or the amount of importation of exportation? Countries may largely vary in different criteria, and even if there are confirmed statistics, the conclusion is still unjustifiable because they cannot objectively reflect whether they are truly economically successfulthe total GDP may be high because of a large population, and a higher per-capital GDP may hide the wealth disparity inside; other measurements may still have problems like this. Though some countries may be manifest in the distance of economic prosperity, like the distance between the US and Cuba, there are great difficulties out there to be considered when comparing the countries that are not so different in their economic development; subjectivity prevails.

In conclusion, it is certainly simple-minded to add working time into the consideration of whether countries are more economically successful or not; nations are also certainly hard to be measured with the obscured definition of economic success.

六、相關(guān)詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)

Correlation 關(guān)聯(lián)

Irrationality 不合理性

Proportional 成正比的

Compel 迫使

Prosperous 繁榮的

Crux 關(guān)鍵因素

Scrutinize 考量

Doable 可行的

Appraisal 評價

Parameter 評價標準

Quantify 量化