雅思備考雅思寫作話題（一個(gè)人能否達(dá)成目標(biāo)）話題分析及范例分享

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老師有話講

各位親愛的讀者老鐵，今天繼續(xù)給各位說一下最近的一些雅思刁題。

照舊，要回答問題，第一步是 ，找出并看懂問題。

雖然有時(shí)候參加考試的學(xué)生回憶出來的題目會(huì)出錯(cuò)，但這道題是沒有錯(cuò)誤的。有些同學(xué)可能會(huì)看不懂。他們說，老師說，to what extent 只有1 個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，怎么 whether 呢?Whether 后怎么能不用問號呢?有這種疑問，可能都是對whether這詞的用法不了解所導(dǎo)致。如果有上述疑問，建議還是先查字典，看一下whether的例句和用法。

所以有一種比較經(jīng)典的錯(cuò)法就是，在agree or disagree里用了 discuss both views的寫法，這其實(shí)是錯(cuò)的，因?yàn)?agree or disagree里，都是自己的看法，不能把鍋甩給別人。Agree or disagree 里，主體段的觀點(diǎn)，不能直接沖突，針鋒相對，自相矛盾，自我打臉，但在 discuss both views 里可以，因?yàn)檫@是別人的觀點(diǎn)。

所以，這一道題的意思是，

whether or not someone achieves their aim這一件事，is mostly a question of luck 。一個(gè)人能否達(dá)成目標(biāo)這件事，主要就是看運(yùn)氣。你多大程度上同意這看法?

另外要答好這道題， 可能要先回答兩個(gè)問題：什么是成功?如何成功?

古今中外，不同人有不同看法。

朋克梟哥的觀點(diǎn)是，大氣。成功學(xué)祖師爺 Dale Carnegie (戴爾卡耐基) 的看法是，一個(gè)人的成功，約有 15%取決于知識和技能，85%取決于溝通。

那么各位同學(xué)呢?可有想到有什么成功的要素?

高分范文

It is a fact that in order to achieve success, the vast majority of people have to work throughout most of their lifetime. It is a common belief that luck is the most important factor in their success. Overall, I strongly disagree with this idea.

It cannot be denied that some sorts of luck help people to achieve their aims, such as gambling, winning lotteries and so on, but I will hardly claim that it is a reliable or trustworthy way. What is worse, it will be arguably impossible to maintain or replicate their success. It is widely reported that most of the lottery winners ended up with bankruptcy for different reasons, mostly because they could not manage their fortune well, and it is not uncommon to see professional gamblers sleeping on the streets in front of luxurious hotels in Las Vegas. It is a dangerous and unreliable game to achieve success with pure luck, so I will argue that those who want to be luckily successful are mostly erroneous.

Quite on the opposite, according to Bill Gates, one person has to be well-prepared, so that he /she can jump up and catch the opportunity. Without sufficient preparation, it will be almost impossible for one person to succeed. Let us assume Microsoft is releasing ten of thousands of job opportunities this year. If one person did not study well at their university, it is highly likely that he/she may fail to keep the job, let alone achieving any long-term goals. Moreover, one person needs to prepare to face frustration, because no one is in good luck forever. He / She needs to be perseverant. As Kobe Bryant said, to realize ones dream, that person needs to wake up at 4 a.m. in the morning, and he/she needs practice and practice, so that no failure or frustration will become their fear.

Most importantly, it will be a complete sin to ignore the unfairness of the society, while attributing other peoples failure to their bad luck. One person cannot achieve success without social justice or a functioning social environment. Back in the 1950s in the US, black people were not allowed to sit at the front rows when white people were around, and they were not allowed to attend college, which was a norm in the society at that time. It would be nearly impossible for the black people to achieve their aims back in that social context, because their rights to receive education was violently removed by a poorly functioning society. Under such circumstance, their aims would mostly be impossible, such as being a doctor, lawyer or the president of the United States. It was not a question of luck but of fairness and equality.

To conclude, I would concede that birth was a complete question of luck, but it cannot determine most of our achievements. By working hard and by being perseverant to overcome any forthcoming frustration or failure, we can become the master of our fate. Luck cannot decide most of our success.

寫得忘乎所以，寫了500個(gè)字 。如果同學(xué)們不想看那么多字， 其實(shí)可以去掉第二段，也是不影響理解的，因?yàn)槲业目捶ň褪?strongly disagree. 在考試時(shí)，如果沒那么多時(shí)間，我可能會(huì)適當(dāng)減少1-2個(gè)論點(diǎn)。

愿看完全文的同學(xué)都能 succeed.

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