雅思寫作常見十大雷區(qū)詞性弄錯(cuò)和用詞不當(dāng)

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詞性弄錯(cuò)和用詞不當(dāng)：教育類話題

錯(cuò)誤范例1

Besides, some researches have indicated that children living in such a circumstance are prone to a sense of unsafe， under the influence of which children may easily abandon themselves to Internet， smoking，alcohol， and even drugs due to the negligence from their busy parents

解析：

錯(cuò)句基本上沒有問題，這種小瑕疵不大會(huì)影響文章的整體評(píng)分。這里a sense of unsafe中應(yīng)該用名詞作介詞of的賓語，所以改為 a sense ofInsecurity＇＂。這個(gè)句子寫得很漂亮，摘出來大家可以學(xué)習(xí)ー下，這樣的水平大概在7分以上。

①＂ living in such a circumstance現(xiàn)在分詞作定語，拿分點(diǎn)!

②＂ are prone to后可跟名詞構(gòu)成＂ be prone to sth＂，也可跟動(dòng)詞不定式構(gòu)成be prone to do sth.＂，意為:易于遭受，有做壞事的傾向。

注意:此句型只用于不好的方面，好的方面可以選擇用 be likely to do sth.;

③用了非限制性定語從句， a sense of insecurity，under the influence of which...這樣使得句子結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，邏輯清晣，是拿分的王牌句型！

④due to the negligence from their busy parents末尾的介詞短語短小精悍，用得中規(guī)中矩!

Besides, some researches have indicatedthat children living in such a circumstance are prone to a sense of insecurity, under the influence of which children may easily abandon themselves to the Internet, smokingalcohol, and even drugs due to the negligence from their busy parents

另外，一些研究已表明生活在這種環(huán)境下的孩子容易有不安全感，因而在這種情況下導(dǎo)致孩子可能輕易地沉迷于互聯(lián)網(wǎng)、吸煙、酒甚至吸毒，而這些都是因?yàn)槊β档募议L對(duì)孩子的忽略造成的。

錯(cuò)誤范例2

Childhood is the most important stage for a persons development. Ones personality and characteristics formed in this period may have life-long influence for an individual.

解析：

固定搭配: to have/ exert a strong influence on/ upon sb./sth.，

＂ influence既可作可數(shù)名詞，也可作不可數(shù)名詞

Childhood is the most important stage for a persons development. Onespersonality and characteristics formed in this period may have life-long influence on an individual

兒童時(shí)期是一個(gè)人成長的最重要階段，在這個(gè)階段形成的個(gè)性和性格往往會(huì)對(duì)一個(gè)人造成一生的影響。

詞性弄錯(cuò)和用詞不當(dāng)：體育健康類話題

錯(cuò)誤范例1

Namely, the stronger the individuals are, the higher possibilities the team will success in a competition event.

解析：

詞性弄錯(cuò)了，構(gòu)成一般將來時(shí)的助動(dòng)詞will后面必須加動(dòng)詞原形，而不能用名詞!

Namely, the stronger the individuals are, the higher possibilities the team will succeed in a competition event

也就是說，在競技比賽中，隊(duì)員個(gè)人越強(qiáng)，團(tuán)隊(duì)在比賽中取得成功的可能性就越大。

詞性弄錯(cuò)和用詞不當(dāng)：工作與生活類話題

錯(cuò)誤范例1

Work, as the primary source of pressure, should be paid close attention first. The measurement for preventing tension in work is to make clear plans for their work with realistic goals.

解析：

①固定搭配:sb. pay close attention to

sth. 變成被動(dòng)語態(tài)為:sth. be paid attention to＂，這里要牢記的是中國學(xué)生最容易出錯(cuò)的兩個(gè)地方：其pay的過去式和過去分詞均為paid＂；其二，介詞to不能漏掉;

②這里 measurement用詞不當(dāng)， measurement＂為不可數(shù)名詞，是測量的意思；而這里很明顯要表達(dá)措施，方法的意思，所以要用 measure＂，而 measure的搭配為: measure to do sth.。

Work, as the primary source of pressure, should be paid close attention to first. The measure to prevent tension in work is to make clear plans fortheir work with realistic goals.

我們應(yīng)該首先關(guān)注工作給我們帶來的主要壓力。防止工作壓力的措施便是制定現(xiàn)實(shí)的工作目標(biāo)，做出明晰的工作計(jì)劃。

錯(cuò)誤范例2

Besides, friends and families may offer them some suggestions to solve their problems.

解析：

suggestion的搭配為: a suggestion about/for/ on sth.

Besides, friends and families may offer them some suggestions about how best to tackle their problems.

另外，針對(duì)如何才能解決這些問題，家人和朋友可以提供最好的建議。

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