雅思寫作優(yōu)秀范文以及解析有錢后最美好的事情是幫助別人

隨著全球化的加速和教育的多樣化，越來越多的學(xué)生選擇留學(xué)，而在申請國外大學(xué)時，語言考試是繞不開的一環(huán)，本文和大家說一說：雅思寫作優(yōu)秀范文以及解析：有錢后最美好的事情是幫助別人，一起往下來看看吧。

“Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree？”

解析審題

本周考題也算一個難得的新題，在近5年內(nèi)都沒有出現(xiàn)過。但這個題目對我們來說，也不應(yīng)構(gòu)成什么大的威脅。富裕之后，最重要的事情是什么？是享受，還是幫助別人？

從正能量方面來說，我們肯定會同意富裕后最美好的事情就是能夠幫到別人。但如何來論證這個觀點呢？

唐老師覺得可以考慮從兩個方面來說：首先，我們有錢后去幫助別人，這是能夠給我們帶來更多幸福和成就感的事情；但是這也有一個條件，那就是，我們只有去幫助那些我們真正想幫助的人，而不是被媒體或輿論所逼迫去幫助別人，這才能帶來真正的幸福，同時，幫助別人帶來的幸福與給別人捐多少錢也不一定成正比。

因此，本題唐老師的思路就是：首先點明觀點（有錢后幫助別人能給我們帶來幸福），然后論證這個幸福來自于我們的內(nèi)心，同時與幫助的幅度沒有太大關(guān)系。這樣寫既圍繞了題目要求，同時也顯得豐富和客觀。各位考生，你是怎么寫的呢？

老師筆記

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If being rich is being happy， can helping others be a super-happiness？ Theresounding answer is yes. The rich would feel even a higher degree of happiness， particularly when they are giving for causes that they are passionate about.

如果富有就是幸福，那么幫助別人是否是超級幸福呢？響亮的回答是肯定的。富人會感到更高程度的幸福，特別是當他們?yōu)槌錆M激情的事由而奉獻時。

解析

（1）本段引入話題，并提出觀點：幫助別人，尤其是為自己喜歡的事由而奉獻時能夠帶來幸福。這種問句開頭方式，需要開門見山，對此把握不好的同學(xué)最好謹慎使用。

（2）resounding 響亮的

（3）giving 給予；捐獻；奉獻

（4）be passionate about... 對......充滿激情

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Generally， those who are happiest are those who give the most to others， according to ancient wisdom and new research. It makes conventional sense that helping other people in need is a path to everlasting happiness. As the Chinese saying goes： “If you want happiness for an hour， take a nap. If you want happiness for a lifetime， help somebody.” Scientific experiments also show that altruism， or selfless concern for the well-being of others， is hard-wired in the brain， and it is pleasurable. In view of all this information， helping others may be just the secret to living a life that is both happy and meaningful.

根據(jù)古老的智慧和新的研究，最幸福的人通常是那些給予別人最多的人。幫助其他需要幫助的人是讓人通往永恒幸福的道路，這在傳統(tǒng)上是有道理的。正如中國諺語所說：“如果你想要一個小時的幸福，就小睡一會兒。如果你想要一輩子的幸福，那就幫助別人吧?！笨茖W(xué)實驗也表明利他主義，即對他人幸福的無私關(guān)懷，是根植于我們大腦中的，而且是令人愉快的?？紤]到所有這些信息，幫助他人也許就是度過幸福而且有意義的一生的秘訣所在。

解析

（1）本段論述幫助他人能夠給人帶來幸福的兩個證據(jù)：古老的智慧和新近的研究。

（2）ancient wisdom 古老的智慧

（3）people in need 需要幫助的人

（4）everlasting 持久的

（5）as the Chinese saying goes，... 正如中國諺語所說......

（6）altruism 利他主義

（7）well-being 利益

（8）hard-wired 存在于內(nèi)心深處的

（9）in view of 鑒于；考慮到

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However， it is important to remember that helping others does not always make the rich feel the happiness they deserve. In some cases， giving can make the rich feel taken advantage of， even though it is the right thing to do. Therefore， to be really happy in helping others， the rich can choose the causes they love. Meanwhile， giving to a cause that specifies where their money is going can lead to a positive feeling of everlasting happiness rather than a negative feeling of resentment. Understandably， it is not only how much money they give， but also how much love they put into giving.

然而，必須要記住，幫助別人并不總讓富人體驗他們應(yīng)得的幸福。在某些情況下，有錢人的奉獻會讓他們覺得被利用，即使奉獻時正確的做法。因此，要真正在幫助別人中感到幸福，富人可以選擇他們自己喜歡的事由。如果一個事由明確了錢將用于何處，此時的奉獻也能帶來永恒幸福的積極感覺，而不是一種消極的怨恨感。不難理解，這與他們奉獻了多少金錢無關(guān)，而是他們投入了多少愛。

解析

（1）本段討論幫助他人獲得幸福感的條件，一是要幫助自己愿意幫助的人或事，二是要清楚知道自己的錢用到哪里。同時指出，幸福感不只是來自捐了多少錢，更來自投入了多少愛。

（2）deserve 應(yīng)得到......

（3）take advantage of 利用；欺騙

（4）specify 清楚說明

（5）resentment 怨恨

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In giving， rich people can choose the causes that fit them to achieve a high degree of happiness. The best thing the rich can do with their money， therefore， is not just being able to help others， or even how much they can help， but being able to help for the right causes.

在奉獻中，富人可以選擇適合他們的事由，以獲得高度的幸福感。因此，富人能用他們的錢來做的最好的事情，不僅僅是能夠幫助別人，甚至也不是能幫到多少忙，而是能為正當?shù)氖掠商峁椭?/p>

解析

（1）本段結(jié)論：有錢人的幸福感不只是來自可以幫助別人，而且來自幫到正確的人。

（2）fit 適合

（3）achieve 達到，實現(xiàn)

本場考試范文

If being rich is being happy， can helping others be a super-happiness？ The resounding answer is yes. The rich would feel even a higher degree of happiness， particularly when they are giving for causes that they are passionate about.

Generally， those who are happiest are those who give the most to others， according to ancient wisdom and new research. It makes conventional sense that helping other people in need is a path to everlasting happiness. As the Chinese saying goes： “If you want happiness for an hour， take a nap. If you want happiness for a lifetime， help somebody.” Scientific experiments also show that altruism， or selfless concern for the well-being of others， is hard-wired in the brain， and it is pleasurable. In view of all this information， helping others may be just the secret to living a life that is both happy and meaningful.

However， it is important to remember that helping others does not always make the rich feel the happiness they deserve. In some cases， giving can make the rich feel taken advantage of， even though it is the right thing to do. Therefore， to be really happy in helping others， the rich can choose the causes they love. Meanwhile， giving to a cause that specifies where their money is going can lead to a positive feeling of everlasting happiness rather than a negative feeling of resentment. Understandably， it is not only how much money they give， but also how much love they put into giving.

In giving， rich people can choose the causes that fit them to achieve a high degree of happiness. The best thing the rich can do with their money， therefore， is not just being able to help others， or even how much they can help， but being able to help for the right causes.

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