雅思作文如何結(jié)尾

近年來，越來越多的中國學(xué)子選擇留學(xué)，那其中雅思作文如何結(jié)尾？本文則針對這個問題，為大家整理了資料，接下來咱們就一起往下了解吧。

就雅思寫作3大出題類型/寫作思路，暫時歸納3種結(jié)尾方式，并試圖一一說明。

(1)一邊倒型：完全同意/反對題目中的一方觀點

結(jié)尾：再次重述觀點，并總結(jié)前文給出的理由。(30-50字即可)

(2)雙邊討論型：對雙方觀點的優(yōu)劣進行討論

結(jié)尾：總結(jié)雙方觀點，提出自己的判斷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和結(jié)論：即傾向于更贊同某一方，還是認為雙方應(yīng)互補，或者認為雙方都有缺陷，因此應(yīng)該提出一個更合理的觀點。(一般需要50-80字左右)

(3)問題解決型：分析問題/現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，提出解決辦法

結(jié)尾：問題/現(xiàn)象的解決辦法(無需再總結(jié)原因)。(一般需要100字以上)

舉例1：一邊倒型

Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants and canteens. Do you agree or disagree?

Everyone has to eat. The question is, where to eat? You may cook and eat at home, or just eat out in restaurants or canteens. My personal opinion is that eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out.

First, it has no doubt that cooking and eating at home can save a lot of money. Generally, the cost of eating in restaurants is much higher than eating at home. By cooking at home, you dont have to pay the labor fee for the chef, and dont have to pay tips to the waiter. What you have to do is just a little hand operation and a little time. From supermarkets, you can buy cheap vegetables and meat, which may cost only 10 percent of the same food in a restaurant. Sometimes, you can get cheaper food in discount time. Especially, a big family may enjoy the method, as the monthly cost would be less.

Second, you can freely select your favorite food to cook. A restaurant cannot always provide you with delicious food. The taste of food in restrurants is usually designed for the public, which is not suitable for a particular guest. If you miss the taste of your mums soup, its not likely to find the same one in a restraurant. In this case, the best choice is to cook by yourself, to reproduce your mums food to the best you can.

Finally, its obvious that eating at home is more healthy and clean. You dont know whether its dirty in the restaurants, and also you dont know whether the food is fresh. But by cooking at home, you can know everything about the cooking materials. Moreover, its easy to control the usage of fat and oil, unless you dont care to become too fat.

In brief, I believe that eating at home is healthy and clean. If people want to save money, eating at home is also a good choice. In addition, people can cook what they like as well. So I personally prefer eating at home.

Band： 7 (難度較低完成質(zhì)量高的動作)

評析：

本習(xí)作采用的.是一邊倒結(jié)構(gòu)。開頭段即表明自己的觀點：在家吃飯更好。接下來三段從三個方面論述在家吃飯的好處：(1)在家吃飯省錢;(2)在家吃飯可吃自己最喜歡的飯菜;(3)在家吃飯更健康衛(wèi)生。最后一段為結(jié)尾段。各位烤鴨注意，這三個原因的先后順序安排符合老雅一直試圖告訴你們的三個層次哦：從物質(zhì)層次(錢)- 心理層次(喜歡)- 社會層次(健康衛(wèi)生)。[若對老雅的三大層次理論仍不清楚，請回讀本公眾號!]

結(jié)尾段里，作者用三句話總結(jié)前面講的三大原因：eating at home is healthy and clean; eating at home also saves money; people can cook what they like if they eat at home. 最后一句結(jié)論：我寧愿在家吃飯。

本結(jié)尾雖然結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，但的確沒有什么難度，甚至過于簡單了，就像體操中下杠前的動作與前面動作是一模一樣的重復(fù)，讓看客都很無聊了。若是老雅來寫，可能會玩點花(這得根據(jù)你自己的情況，不要從杠上掉下來最重要!)：

In brief, I personally prefer eating at home. Besides saving money and being more healthy and clean, eating at home also gives me the freedom to cook whatever I like, and I like this feeling.

舉例 2： 雙邊討論型

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.

The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.

However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job or to do something completely different from a university course. But overall I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.

My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.

Band：8 (難度適中完成質(zhì)量較高的動作)

評析：

本習(xí)作采用的雙邊討論型結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段提出現(xiàn)象，但不表明自己觀點;第二段討論上大學(xué)前休假或工作一年的好處：拓寬視野、積累資源、學(xué)會獨立;第三段講此舉可能帶來的壞處：很多人就再也難以適應(yīng)大學(xué)生活了(順便表明自己不太贊同這個觀點);最后一段結(jié)論段。內(nèi)容并無驚艷之處。

雙邊討論的結(jié)尾段需要表明自己的觀點，并簡要說明原因(也就是說到底是什么標(biāo)準(zhǔn)讓你選擇支持某個觀點，或者兩個觀點都支持，甚或兩個觀點都反對)。本作文對學(xué)生上大學(xué)前工作或休假1年表示贊同，原因是可以拓寬視野，接下來用 自然接續(xù)法講為什么拓寬視野很重要：拓寬視野就可以幫助他們清楚地知道生活需要什么，而知道了生活需要什么后他們就會變得非常有效率，有動力(如果還不知道自然接續(xù)是什么，你已經(jīng)OUT啦!沒關(guān)系，請回看老雅公眾號，馬上補課!)。這個結(jié)尾段顯得非常有效：觀點明確，支持觀點的理由充分。值得注意的是：在雙邊討論作文中，由于前面討論雙方觀點已經(jīng)占據(jù)了很多篇幅，因此，在結(jié)尾段，一般不再對自己的結(jié)論過多展開論述，而是在前文討論基礎(chǔ)上表明立場，并用1-2句話適當(dāng)說出自己的理由。在這樣的結(jié)尾段中，最重要的就是要寫出：(1)自己的觀點;(2)自己觀點的判斷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)或者依據(jù)(不需詳細展開)。

舉例3：問題分析/解決型

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What other measures do you think might be effective?

There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.

While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of increasing in traffic and pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long. As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads. But there are various other measures that could be implemented that would have a huge effect on these problems.

I think to tackle the problem of pollution, cleaner fuels need to be developed. The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to use. Persuading manufacturers and travelers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective strategy for improving the air quality, especially in cities.

However, traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle people can use. To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers. For example, if sufficient sky train and underground train system were built and effectively maintained in our major society, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own cars for long journeys.

Band：8.5 (難度較大完成質(zhì)量較高的動作)

本題是一個類似討論+問題解決綜合類題型，很少見，但萬變不離其宗。第一段提出問題，然后馬上就題目觀點提出自己意見：上漲油價可能不是解決污染和交通問題的最好辦法。第二段論述為什么上漲油價解決不了問題：(1)上漲油價并不能很長久地限制私人開車;(2)上漲油價會影響公共交通。本段最后一句提出還有其他辦法來解決這個問題。第三段論述另外一個辦法，即開發(fā)新型汽車來降低污染問題。第四段提出，為解決交通問題，需要提供更多交通選擇(包括空中火車，地下鐵路，長途火車和汽車等)。因此，這篇寫作的結(jié)構(gòu)就是：引入段+否定題目觀點段+問題解決1段+問題解決2段。當(dāng)然，本文的第三段和第四段可以合并起來，但可能會顯得太長，因此分開還是最好的選擇，畢竟兩段提出的是不同問題的解決辦法。注意：本題中有兩個問題需要解決，因此需要提出不同的解決辦法。

大家若有興趣，可以進一步學(xué)習(xí)本文在提出解決辦法時，使用的不同句型：

1)I think to tackle the problem of pollution, cleaner fuels need to be developed. (need to do...引導(dǎo)建議)

2)...if sufficient sky train and underground train system were built and effectively maintained in our major society, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.(虛擬語氣引導(dǎo)建議)

3)Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own cars for long journeys. (should 引導(dǎo)建議)

相比而言，我們的同學(xué)好像通篇只會用should來引導(dǎo)建議和問題解決方法，做人做文的差距怎么那么大呢!

另外提一句，我們的同學(xué)只要一寫到問題解決，好像就必須要寫提高......的意識、政府要加強教育 這樣假大空的詞句，真是夠了!看看本段人家的具體建議，記住：在雅思作文中拒絕假大空，多點具體實際、貼近生活的內(nèi)容!

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