2022年2月12日雅思大作文范文:老人退休后給自己花錢而不存錢

2022年2月12日雅思大作文范文

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Older people after retirement choose to spend money for themselves (e.g. holiday) rather than saving money for their children.

Is it a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

社會(huì)類

【題目解析】

題目大意：老人退休后選擇給自己花錢而不是為他們的孩子存錢。

題目要求考生回答“該現(xiàn)象的是積極發(fā)展還是消極發(fā)展”。

這個(gè)題目可以有兩種觀點(diǎn)1）完全贊同積極/消極，2）大部分贊同積極/消極。

本文筆者選擇的觀點(diǎn)是“完全贊同是積極發(fā)展”，因?yàn)?）老年人可以享受晚年生活，2）他們的孩子可以變得更獨(dú)立。

【寫作思路】

Para 1 = 題目改寫 + 個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)（完全積極）

Para 2 = 支持理由1

Para 3 = 支持理由2

Para 4 = 重申觀點(diǎn) + 總結(jié)主體2個(gè)段中的理由

【參考范文】

Many retired people prefer to use their savings and pensions merely to suit their own needs by participating in a wide range of activities, such as taking holidays, instead of making deposits for their offspring. Personally, I strongly believe this is beneficial because it allows the elderly to enjoy their later years and helps their children to be more independent.

The primary reason supporting my stance is that old people can feel happier about their life after retirement. Many elderly people could not do what they expected to do when they were young because of work and family commitments, but now they can achieve their dreams with the money they have saved. For example, while some can take holidays domestically and internationally to taste multifarious cuisines and see splendid scenery in person, others can enrol themselves in a university course to gain a degree. If they saved money for their children, these would not happen.

Another important point I consider relevant is that adult children can be encouraged to be more independent. In some parts of the globe, especially in Asian countries, many old people endeavour to save money to support their children purchasing properties and even to rear their grandchildren, resulting in a fact that their adult children may become too idle to work diligently to achieve success in life and work. In contrast, when financial assistance is withdrawn by their old parents, these adults will feel the pressure to make money.

In conclusion, I completely agree that there are positive outcomes if old people spend money on recreational activities for themselves only, instead of saving up for their adult children. After all, not only can senior citizens be provided with abundant opportunities to do whatever they intend to do, but also their children will learn to be more independent.

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