雅思口語解析:A family member
2023-05-24 14:28:27 來源:中國教育在線
雅思口語解析:A family member
今天的題目是:
Describe a family member that you have spent the most time with.
You should say
who this person is
what you often do together
what you think of this person
and explain why you spend most time with him/her.
老師在講解中詳細說明了套用模板的問題
其實考官一聽就知道誰是在背誦啦
我們明明有不錯的語言能力
為什么不能自己去描述呢?
畢竟是共度時間最長的家人
能回憶起來的還是很多的
但是絕不能將一件件事情羅列在一起
一定要對于事件做充分的擴充
解析:
很多同學人物類話題喜歡使用模板,上來就是外貌描述,然后是性格,等等等等,然而這樣的描述完全不自然,很容易聽出來是背誦或套用,請盡量避免。我們說的所有內容都要與話題相關。
這個話題明顯需要講的重點是在一起,那么一起做什么就會占到2分鐘的大部分篇幅。需要避免講得太雜太散,導致沒有連貫性。需要把相關的內容放在一起講,圍繞一個點,講幾句話,然后再講另一個點。這是一種常用的PART2的技巧。
舉例來說,很多同學想講媽媽,那么,不要說,跟媽媽在一起偶爾逛街,偶爾聊天,有時候媽媽做飯給我吃……這樣描述生硬而且簡單,不能達到表現(xiàn)語言水平的目的。需要在每個內容上做一定的擴展(細節(jié),原因,結果,舉例等等),并且在詞匯上加以提升,挖掘出每個內容可以涉及的亮點(詞匯、搭配、語法結構等),從而達到我們表現(xiàn)語言的目的。
語料:
shopping: department stores, window shopping, whatever I want, afford, spoil, try on, look at … in the minor, close fit, go well with, match, perfectionist, picky, particular, hard to please, perfect clothes, smart suit, tailor made
chat: common topics, generation gap, care much about, dream job, story line, speculate…, plots… ending… characters… disagreement…
cook: meals, dinner, good cook, chef, secret recipes, common dishes, nothing special, adjust the flavor to my liking, have been used to…, balanced… nutrition facts, take great care of…
范文:
I'm going to talk about my mom, because I spend most time with her at home. Actually, we don't do anything special together, but I feel relaxed, comfortable and safe with her.
We often have meals together, especially the dinner. Mom cooks for the family and I often help her in the kitchen. I would say she is a good cook, although her cooking is not comparable with the chefs' in top restaurants. However, on top of all the common dishes and traditional Chinese food, she knows some secret recipes that are really fantastic. More importantly, mom would adjust the flavor of the dishes to my liking. I guess that's why I have been used to her cooking and the balanced, nutritious diet.
Mom and I also talk quite a lot. Unlike other mothers, my mom tries her best to find common topics with me, although we obvious have a generation gap. I can tell that she really cares much about me. She would ask me questions about the animation series that I watch as well as the bands that I listen to. When we watch TV together, which happens quite a lot, we would talk about the story line and sometimes try to speculate plots and even the ending of different characters. We don't always reach an agreement, however, it's great fun.
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