劍橋雅思13Test1寫作Task1范文及解析WRITING TASK 1

劍橋雅思13Test1寫作Task1范文及解析WRITING TASK 1

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant。

題目分析

要點

1把變化之處用筆標出序號,按順序逐一陳述;

2主體段每段描述一幅圖,重點對是2010年的描述。

錯誤理解：

1描述兩幅圖時都不能使用一般現(xiàn)在時,也不能使用現(xiàn)在完成時。

2.2010年的public car park是在醫(yī)院以外的東部,應用on the east of....

劍橋雅思13寫作范文：

There are two maps shown. The first of which shows the City Hospital in 2007 and the second shows changes made in 2010.

In 2007, we can clearly see that the city hospital was surrounded by a ring road and to the south on 'Hospital Road' there were 6 bus stops, 3 on each side and a Staff and Public Car park on the east side of the road.

By 2010, several changes had been made. The ring road remained, but now included a roundabout to the south that connect Hospital Road and a new large bus station, to replace the bus stops On the east side of the hospital, there was a new Public car Park, with the old area now being used solely for staff.

In summary, the development has increased the space for drivers as well as the use of public transport. It has eliminated some of the problems due to traffic flow.

范文譯文：

題中有兩張圖。第一張圖顯示的是2007年的市醫(yī)院,第二張圖顯示的是2010年的一些變化。

在2007年,我們可以很清晰地看到市醫(yī)院由一條環(huán)路圍繞,南邊是醫(yī)院路,附有6個公交車站,每側有3個,路東還有一個員工與公共停車場。

到2010年時,發(fā)生了一些變化。環(huán)路仍然維持原狀,但現(xiàn)在南邊加了一個環(huán)島,與醫(yī)院路連接起來。還有一處新建的大型公交車站,取代了原來的幾個公交車站。在醫(yī)院東側,有一處新的公共停車場,而原有的停車場改為僅供員工使用

總之,這次開發(fā)增加了停車的空間以及公共交通。這樣就消除了交通流量帶來的一些問題。

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