雅思大作文范文：跳傘和滑雪等極限運(yùn)動(dòng)應(yīng)該禁止

雅思大作文范文：跳傘和滑雪等極限運(yùn)動(dòng)應(yīng)該禁止

雅思大作文題目：

Extreme sports,such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【話題分類】：社會(huì)生活類

【題目解析】：

這是一道從題型上比較簡(jiǎn)單的“觀點(diǎn)類（agree/disagree）”題目，大意是：像跳傘和滑雪這樣的極限運(yùn)動(dòng)很危險(xiǎn)，所以應(yīng)該禁止。你是否同意該觀點(diǎn)？

該題型在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)上通?？梢员容^多樣化；筆者選擇的是“完全不同意”的“一邊倒”寫法，相對(duì)更加直接，觀點(diǎn)力度更強(qiáng)。

支持“完全不同意禁止極限運(yùn)動(dòng)”的理由是：

1）人們會(huì)失去體驗(yàn)與普通運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目不一樣樂趣的機(jī)會(huì)；

2）人們會(huì)失去另一種減壓方式，尤其是當(dāng)其它方式不奏效時(shí)。

【寫作思路】：

開頭段：改寫題目+明確表明自己的觀點(diǎn)（完全不同意）。

主體段1：不同意原因1——人們會(huì)失去體驗(yàn)與普通運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目不一樣的樂趣的機(jī)會(huì)。

主體段2：不同意原因2——人們會(huì)失去另一種減壓方式，尤其是當(dāng)其它方式不奏效時(shí)。

結(jié)尾段：總結(jié)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)+提出建議。

【參考范文】

There are those who opine that sporting activities that are exciting and dangerous ought to be prohibited because they are risky.Personally,I totally disagree with this statement as this practice will hinder people from enjoying the fun which cannot be brought by other traditional events as well as benefiting from an effective stress reliver.

The primary justification for why I completely oppose the idea of calling a halt to adventure sports is the likelihood of the general public being deprived of opportunities to experience distinctive fun.Compared with common sports that people do for pleasure,extreme ones always embrace heights and speeds and provide an intense workout,which are characteristics that traditional activities fail to possess.Thus,when taking part in extreme sports,people are required to exert themselves fully,thereby feeling a greater amount of excitement.

Another point supporting my stance is that people will lose an effective method to reduce their pressure,especially when other approaches do not work.A large number of people today are stressful and playing basketball or going biking are normally treated as sports helping them unwind.In fact,those are not helpful to victims suffering from pressure going beyond the level of their feasibility while extreme sports can perform better as being in a dangerous situation triggers a release of dopamine in people’s brain,keeping depression at bay in a possible manner.

In conclusion,I strongly disapprove of the viewpoint that it is of great necessity to ban extreme sports merely due to their potential danger.This is because people will miss out on a great recreational activity and a very good approach to stress management without these sports.However,safety is crucial,so I recommend that participants should be fully trained before participating in these activities and sufficient precautionary measures should be made available.

(303 words)

【亮點(diǎn)詞匯及短語(yǔ)】

1.opine(v.)認(rèn)為

2.sporting activities運(yùn)動(dòng)

3.prohibit(v.)禁止

4.risky(adj.)危險(xiǎn)的

5.hinder…from…阻止

6.event(v.)（運(yùn)動(dòng)）項(xiàng)目

7.benefit from受益于

8.stress reliver減輕壓力的方法

9.primary(adj.)主要的

10.justification(n.)理由

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