2019年6月14號雅思大作文范文（老年人退休工作）

2019年6月14號雅思大作文范文（老年人退休工作）

Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement 退休. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.

Introduction: (Introduce the topic and STATE your opinion. MENTION the reasons supporting your opinion.)

第一段：改寫題目+給出自己的觀

The recent medical advancement has improved human’s longevity, and even after retirement, the elderly people are still living their life positively. Therefore, I strongly believe that older people ought to involve in jobs positively even they reach their retirement age, as it not only helps the retired people to keep healthy but also the whole society can make use of their personal working experience and skills.

最近的醫(yī)學進步提高了人類的壽命，即使退休后，老年人仍然積極地生活。因此，我強烈認為老年人即使到了退休年齡也應該積極地參與工作，因為這不僅有助于退休人員保持健康，而且整個社會可以利用他們的個人工作經(jīng)驗和技能。

第二段：

Body Paragraph 1: (EXPLAIN reason 1)

Various studies have proved that working can help people to keep their psychological health after their retirement. The reason is that if an individual suddenly stops in engaging in any economical activities, to some extent, he would feel that he is worthless to the society, and go into depression in some extreme cases. For example, studies in some universities revealed that more than half of older inhabitants who had worked in some big companies still have high-effective brains and functioning body, however, most of them are easy to fall sick after they stop all the economically rewarding activities.

各種研究證明，工作可以幫助人們保持退休后的心理健康。原因是，如果一個人突然停止從事任何經(jīng)濟活動，在某種程度上，他會覺得自己對社會毫無價值，在一些極端的情況下會陷入抑郁。例如，一些大學的研究顯示，在一些大公司工作過的老年人中，超過一半的人仍然擁有高效的大腦和功能健全的身體，然而，他們中的大多數(shù)人在停止所有經(jīng)濟上有回報的活動后很容易生病。

第三段：

Body Paragraph 2: (EXPLAIN reason 2)

In addition, not allowing the retired people to participate in job activities is harmful to the regional economy. Due to the reason is that these elder people have at least three decades of working experience, which, to some extent, they are more productive than young employees. Moreover, training new employees to replace the elderly staffs demand huge economic costs, and this process often consumes several years. For example, some older employees in multi-international enterprises, especially those from administrative regions, are extremely important to the companies and also the young employees, as they have a deep understanding of the internal working principles of the agencies.

此外，不允許退休人員參加工作活動對地區(qū)經(jīng)濟是有害的。原因是這些老年人至少有30年的工作經(jīng)驗，在某種程度上，他們比年輕員工更有生產(chǎn)力。此外，培訓新員工來代替老員工需要巨大的經(jīng)濟成本，這個過程往往要花費幾年時間。例如，一些跨國企業(yè)的老員工，尤其是來自行政區(qū)域的老員工，對公司和年輕員工來說都是非常重要的，因為他們對機構內(nèi)部的工作原理有著深刻的理解。

第四段：

Conclusion:

In conclusion, if individuals are encouraged to work after they retired from their workplaces, this would not only be beneficial to them but also do good to the enterprises. This would eventually bring economical prosperous to the whole society.

總之，如果鼓勵個人退休后工作，這不僅對他們有利，而且對企業(yè)也有好處。這最終會給整個社會帶來經(jīng)濟繁榮。

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