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2025-02-08 09:25:49 來源:中國教育在線

隨著人們經(jīng)濟水平的提高,對于很多家庭來說,出國留學(xué)不再是一個可望而不可及的事情,許多人都想要出國,那其中托福寫作用句太平庸得不到高分?針對這個問題,下面中國教育在線小編就來和大家分享一下。

托福寫作用句太平庸得不到高分

托福寫作語法表達(dá)改寫實例分析

選擇合適的語法結(jié)構(gòu)可以使句子意思的表達(dá)更為精確和簡練。雖然語法的多樣性也很重要,但選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z法結(jié)構(gòu)仍然是更為重要的考慮因素。以下,推薦幾種考生們在考慮選擇何種語法結(jié)構(gòu)時可以參考的原則:

1.一個句子的主語和謂語動詞應(yīng)該能夠反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如:

The situation that resulted in my grandfather’s not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

從意思上來分析,上面這句話需要表達(dá)的重要的概念是“grandfather’s not being able to study”,而在表達(dá)這個概念時,原句用的主語是situation,謂語動詞是was,不能強調(diào)需要表達(dá)的重點概念,可以改為下面這句話:

My grandfather couldn’t study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

2.避免頻繁使用“there be”結(jié)構(gòu),例如下面的句子:

There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day.It was hard work for my grandfather.

可以改為:My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

更簡潔的句式為:

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

3.把從句改為短語或單詞。例如:

Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located 100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

簡介的表達(dá)方式為:

The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.

4.僅在需要強調(diào)賓語而不是主語的時候,才使用被動語態(tài)。例如:

In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather’s family.

本句不夠簡潔的原因是本句的重心應(yīng)該是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather’s

family”,而使用了被動語態(tài)后,仿佛重心變成了cows和hay。下面的表達(dá)方式是主動語態(tài),相對來說更簡潔一些:

In the fall, my grandfather’s family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

5.用更為精確的一個動詞來代替動詞短語,例如下面這句話:

My grandfather didn’t have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.

Stand around doing nothing其實可以用一個動詞來表達(dá),即loiter:My grandfather didn’t have time to loiter with his school friends.

6.有時兩句話的信息經(jīng)過組合完全可以用一句話來簡練地表達(dá),例如:

Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.

兩句話的信息可以合并為下面這句更為簡潔的句子:

Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses,let alone pay for a university degree.

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