雅思作文到底怎么寫

2023-08-13 10:51:32 來源：中國教育在線

隨著人們經濟水平的提高，對于很多家庭來說，留學不再是一個可望而不可及的事情，許多人都想要留學，那其中雅思作文到底怎么寫？針對這個問題，下面中國教育在線小編就來和大家分享一下。

雅思作文到底怎么寫

雅思的評分標準已經詳細地描述了對于連貫與銜接(Coherence and Cohesion)的要求。只要我們盡量依照這個標準寫文章，就能最大程度地提高文章的流暢度。下面是小編搜集整理的關于雅思作文到底怎么寫的資料，歡迎查閱。

連貫與銜接涵蓋了四個方面的考量：

1 有邏輯有條理地組織論點

一篇文章只有一個立場，但是論點可以有幾個。那么這幾個論點如何排列，哪個在前哪個在后呢?這些是有講究的，同學們不能想到哪寫哪兒。下面的段落是學生的例文，其中就存在論點排列的問題

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under no control, it will be terrible, because young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours, and the information online can be good and bad as well. If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. So, studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.

這段文字的中心內容是網絡學習存在的問題。論點包括兩個，學生的自律和網絡的內容。關于學生自律的問題有兩句話，young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours,以及 If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day.這兩句話有相關性，但是卻被網絡那句話隔開了。這樣會給讀者造成閱讀的障礙，降低文章的流暢度。所以重新調整這幾句話的位置，就可以很快解決這個問題。

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under no control, it will be terrible. Young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours. If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. And the information online can be good and bad as well. So, studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.

2 連接手段使用得自然多樣

論點之間如何連接?有哪些連接手段?下面這個段落的中心內容是看電視太多產生的問題，共有三個論點。所使用的連接手段是正確有效的，但是單一，少變化。每一個論點之間都使用了副詞做連接詞，而且都是在句首。

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems. Firstly, it is bad for children’s health. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weak body. Secondly, if children spend too much time watching TV, they would have less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to their feeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Last but not least, watching TV too long, children may become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactive activity by many researches.

下面的段落是對照版本。其中使用了代詞，副詞和形容詞等多種連接手段，而且做到了自然銜接：

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems and the most obvious one is the negative impact on physical health of children. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weak body.Another concern is about social development of children. If they spend too much time watching TV, they would have less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to their feeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Children watching TV too long may also become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactive activity by many researches.

3 段落的中心內容與中心句

一個段落只有一個中心思想，這個中心思想通常會體現(xiàn)在一個總結性的句子當中，這句話叫做中心句。中心句在學術文章中常常落在段首，以方便閱讀。中心句如同射擊的靶子，要直指文章主題，這樣后面的論點才不會偏離題目，因此非常重要。上面關于看電視太多的段落，中心句就寫的非常明確。下面再給同學們一些句子，可以靈活應用于立論段，即證明自己觀點的段落。

It is hard to argue with the fact that workers are the direct/ first beneficiaries of this working fashion.

There is no doubt that many employees would favour/welcome telework.

Statistics show that there are few things which impact the human mind more than mass media.

The mass media hold a large share of importance in society.

A life without the presence of mass media would seem improbable for many.

However, this does not mean that …

下面是一些可以用于讓步段的中心句：

there are certainly some minor downsides in…

I admit that … is not perfect.

I understand why some people oppose …

Of course there are some opposite voices against …

the disapproving voices also sound reasonable.

It is natural to regard a university as a phase preparing for a future job…

the other side of the argument is also valid.

Surely pushing their children towards academic study makes sense for parents.

You cannot be honest without admitting ….

4 指示代詞的準確使用

中文和英文在指示代詞上有較大的區(qū)別。中文習慣重復名詞，而英文則強調用代詞。如‘我今天把錢包丟了，我那個錢包可好看了?！鄬挠⑽谋磉_是使用代詞而不再重復錢包這個名詞， ‘I lost my purse today, and it was so cute.’ 或者 ‘I lost my purse, which was so cute.’流暢度高的文章指示代詞使用正確，指向清楚。下面這兩句話當中有兩個代詞it，但是存在指代不清的問題：

Government’s investment is always the focus that people pay more attention to. Recently, itbecomes a controversy that whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions.

前一個it指代后面whether從句，后一個it指代government.為了理清關系，減少模糊，最好不用形式主語這個句型，而是直接把主語從句放在主語的位置上。修改如下：

Government’s budget is always the attention focus of the public. Whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions causes controversy.

雅思寫作必備實用技巧

一：寫

要練習寫雅思真題。雅思真題可以練劍橋雅思系列的，只有練了雅思真題才能對于雅思的出題思路和題目構成有清晰完整的了解。在練習的時候要注意應該在規(guī)定時間內完成，只有在有時間限制的壓力下寫作，考生才能在考試的時候發(fā)揮自如。在練習寫作的時候也不一定非得要寫完整的文章，有時候可以進行段落論證的寫作。

比如，專門花時間練一練開頭段或結尾段的寫作。有時把文章分解了寫可以更能磨練寫作技巧。有時候也可以專門練習某種論證手法的寫作，甚至對于常用的句型可以進行造句練習。在練習頻率上，基本應該保持兩天寫一篇以上。

二：讀

如果只是一味埋頭苦練的話，那只能提高寫作速度而在雅思寫作水平上不一定會有長足的進步。只有看了好的文章，考生才會知道應該往哪方面努力以及自己的文章到底有什么不足。

看的時候不要只看懂就行，而要著眼于三個方面：雅思考官范文是如何提出觀點并進行論證的，運用了哪些論證手法;范文是怎么安排段落的，段落之間以及句子之間是怎么連接在一起的，運用了哪些銜接手段;范文里有什么精彩的詞、詞組和句型是值得我們模仿的。

如果考生能夠舉一反三，仔細思考并且適當借鑒的話，那么看一篇就會有一篇的受益。除了考官范文以外，其它的一些優(yōu)秀范文也可以參考。各種精彩段落，包括雅思閱讀文章里面的一些論證方法和有用表達也可以成為學習的對象。

三：改

有時候考生越看范文會越覺得郁悶甚至沮喪，因為發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的低水平文章和高分作文之間似乎存在著不可逾越的巨大鴻溝。要想跨越這條鴻溝，彌補其中的差距，關鍵在多修改。考生應該自己先在規(guī)定時間內完成作文，然后對照范文，看看自己雅思作文中存在的問題。

有沒有審題錯誤?結構是否混亂?有沒有表達不清的地方?然后仔細琢磨一下，范文是怎么展開論證的?看數遍范文以后可以試著根據剛才學習范文的體會和收獲來修改自己原先寫過的文章，把論證不夠充分的地方重新論證一下，關聯(lián)不當的地方修補一下，錯誤表達改正過來。當然，如果能夠有雅思老師的指導，效果會更好。這樣，練一篇，看一篇，改一遍。寫一次就會有一次的收獲。