雅思寫作不跑題的技巧
2023-08-15 10:21:37 來源:中國教育在線
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雅思寫作不跑題的技巧
1.熟悉可能涉及的話題
可用official guide提供的185個topics,或去下載題庫,然后反復(fù)閱讀題目。
185個topics從雅思獨立寫作模式上分可分為:
解釋現(xiàn)象類:(如解釋一下為什么現(xiàn)代人的壽命比以前的長)
對立觀點類:
給出兩個對立的事物或者一個事物對立的兩個方面,要求考生支持一方并進(jìn)行說明
或給出兩個對立事物或一個事物對立的兩個方面,要求考生說明二者為什么不同或比較它們的優(yōu)缺點,并給出理由(Some people like different friends. Other likes similar friends. Compare the advantages of these two kinds of friends. Which kind of friend do you prefer? Explain why.)
185個topics從內(nèi)容上可分為:
學(xué)習(xí)類:(如自學(xué)還是跟老師學(xué),學(xué)廣還是學(xué)精)
工作類:(如在大公司還是小公司)
生活類:(如食品烹飪便捷是否提高生活質(zhì)量,如喜歡在家里吃飯還是在餐廳吃飯)
電視電影類:(如電視電影疏遠(yuǎn)了家人的情感,你是否同意)
消費類:(如花在娛樂上,還是事業(yè)上)
環(huán)境類:(如政府投入環(huán)保的力度是否應(yīng)該大于投入經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的力度)
古老建筑類:(如是否應(yīng)該保留老建筑)
成功類:(如成功的衡量標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是金錢和榮耀,你的看法如何)
性格類:(如聰明的朋友比幽默的朋友重要,你是否同意)
2.形成自己的答案資源庫
熟悉了寫作題目之后,就要準(zhǔn)備自己的答案資源庫了。
自己的資源庫要包括:同一類題目的通用觀點,有針對性的例證(不一定都要背名人典故,可以從自身取材,自給自足)。這些內(nèi)容都是要自己去深思,需要有人點撥,才能形成一個清晰的構(gòu)架和寫作流程的。我的習(xí)慣就是羊毛出在羊身上,來源于彼,還原于彼。
3.模仿幾個好句子
雅思作文中拽句子不用很多,點綴其中,添彩即可。模仿的句子來源,可以是閱讀中的復(fù)雜句式,先分析長句子的語義功能:它在文章中起了什么作用,是總結(jié),是過渡,是舉例,還是因果?那么我在用到總結(jié)的語句時,是不是能偷天換日地用上這樣的句式? 雅思寫作中用上幾次之后,這些句子就會變得簡單熟悉了。
雅思大作文如何找準(zhǔn)中心論點
(一)單邊支持/反對類型
提問:Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
范文1:(反對)In my opinion , these subject are not only useful but also fascinating, and it is simply too early for primary schoolchildren to study science and technology.
(二)半支持半反對型
提問:To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
范文2:From my point of view
(三)探討雙方型(可以參考前文“兼收并蓄”套路)
提問:Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
范文3:
1. To my way of thinking , both sides of the argument have their own reasons, and we need a detailed analysis to get to the root of this controversy. 雙方都有理,需要仔細(xì)分析才可了解爭議起因
2. To my way of thinking , both these views can be justified to some extent. 一定程度上都有道理
3. To my way of thinking, both these views contain some elements of the truth, which will be discussed in detail in the following essay.
注:Which 引導(dǎo)定語從句很自然過渡到主體段
(四)分析解決型
提問:
In what ways could mobile phones and Internet be useful to older people? How can old people be encouraged to use this high technology?
→ To my mind
(五)陳述利弊型
提問:
Does the usefulness of this method of learning outweigh its limitations?(advantage = usefulness,disadvantage = limitations)
→ To the best of my knowledge
(六)多重選擇型(少見)
提問:
What others factors should be considered? Of these factors, do you think anyone is more important than others?
→ As far as I am concerned
編者按:
大作文的開頭一定要注意,可以寫鋪墊的句子來引出觀點,但是如果鋪墊的句子和下面引出的觀點沒有很好的邏輯聯(lián)系,那么不如不寫,而是開門見山的直接寫觀點句!
例如:
Recently, computer is very popular, therefore computer games at
tract attention of the young. Some people think... , the others ar
gue that... ,
這個句子,劃線的部分就很不好,沒有必然的因果聯(lián)系,這樣來鋪墊開頭,不如不寫,而直接寫觀點:
Recently, computer games prevail among the young, which arouses a debate on.... .
另外,以上推薦的大作文開頭的一些套句可以使用,但記住,要6 分以上的同學(xué),在使用這些套句后,一定要在套句里面寫一些自己的觀點、支持,以區(qū)別直接使用套句而沒有original 內(nèi)容的寫作!
雅思大作文論點角度積累
一、科技和經(jīng)濟(jì)
在雅思論文主體部分寫作中,科技角度是使用頻率最高的角度。絕大多數(shù)作文的話題都可以從科技發(fā)展對人的生活帶來的影響這個角度來加以分析。例如:
討論是否將動物用于科學(xué)實驗:
Some scientists claim that experiments carried out on animals would be crucial for potential breakthroughs in treating some of the most-feared incurable diseases.
討論社會道德下滑:
Development of science and technology has given birth to materialism and capitalism which favor the research for economic growth and freedom of men. Consequently, no spiritual, moral, and traditional values are taken into account.
壓力大的原因:
The rapid development of science and technology makes work today more demanding than it used to be.
親情淡漠的原因:
The availability of a great variety of high-tech recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with the members of their families.
環(huán)保全球化的原因:
Developing countries lack sufficient numbers of qualified scientists and other skilled personnel to cope with the increasingly serious environmental problems, such as the ozone depletion, the marine pollution and the like.
如果說科技的發(fā)展是人類社會進(jìn)步的助推器,那么經(jīng)濟(jì)的影響就是社會前進(jìn)的方向標(biāo)。經(jīng)濟(jì)的強(qiáng)弱通常會導(dǎo)致某一現(xiàn)象的出現(xiàn)或某種結(jié)果的產(chǎn)生。比如在討論什么是最偉大的發(fā)明時,考生可能想到電話。那么怎樣來支持這一觀點呢?試看下面的句子:
The development of the telephone created a new market for the employment of women. The position of telephone operators was most often filled by women, creating a new world of opportunities for females to struggle for the equal rights to males.
通過說明電話的發(fā)明使女性獲得工作更多的工作機(jī)會,從而在經(jīng)濟(jì)是更加獨力,這對于她們爭取平等的權(quán)利起到了巨大的推動作用。
二、肉體和靈魂
雅思大作文常會出一些有關(guān)科技發(fā)明或娛樂方式的利與弊話題。那么不管是寫好處還是壞處,考生應(yīng)該從該發(fā)明或娛樂對人的肉體和靈魂這兩方面去組織自己的分支觀點。比如電腦對肉體的影響:
You don"t have to be a scientist to see that, due to overuse of the computer, a lot of kids get little exercise, which makes them obese.
Another common disadvantage is that playing too much on the computer can cause bad eyesight.
發(fā)明或娛樂對肉體的影響主要表現(xiàn)在削弱勢力和增加肥胖兩個方面,而其對靈魂的影響則涉及一下多個方面。
1.高頻率的信息切換影響孩子們的耐性。
There is not deny in that with the advent of technology, our patience grows thin.
2.媒體中的暴力節(jié)目扭曲孩子們的靈魂。
Media violence affects children by: increasing aggressiveness and anti-social behavior; intensifying their fear of becoming victims; making them less sensitive to violence and to victims of violence; encouraging their appetite for more violence in entertainment and in real life.
3.對媒體過多關(guān)注使孩子們變的孤僻而脫離現(xiàn)實生活。
For lack of face-to-face contact, modern children tend to be more introverted, unsocial, isolated and indifferent than those kids in last century.
三、權(quán)利和平等
四方的文化在一定程度上可以濃縮為:權(quán)利、平等和自由。中國考生在人們該不該做什么事情或行為的時候應(yīng)該多從這個方面去說服考官。
如果寫到動物的保護(hù)問題時,可以說:Animals are not created for humans any more than women are created for men, black for white.
在寫到政府是否該花錢來發(fā)展武器時,可以說:There is no doubt that the advancement of military technologies is one of the greatest dangers to all human rights, including the most basic right to life itself.
在寫到環(huán)境的重要性時,可以說:
All human beings have the fundamental right to an environment adequate for their health and well-being.
在寫到小孩子是否應(yīng)該對自己犯的罪負(fù)責(zé)時,可以說:
When someone turns 18, he or she should be tried as an adult because they have adult rights. Children, however, do not have the same rights as adults do. Then, if a five-year-old child killing someone has been sentenced the death penalty, the trial that determines whether or not someone should be tried as an adult are absurd.
在寫到傳統(tǒng)的西方道德中對私有財產(chǎn)的尊重時,可以說:
Respect for property is no less important than respect for person. Indeed, respect for property is one species of respect for person. Property is the stuff of personal independence. It is, therefore, an economic foundation of freedom. A society in which respect for property diminishes is one in which freedom diminishes.
四、個人國家
有時候,一個現(xiàn)象或問題的出現(xiàn)是由于個人的努力和汗水或個人的疏忽,以及社會國家重視或政府的政策不恰當(dāng)而導(dǎo)致的。例如:
運動員是否應(yīng)該拿高薪:
Athletes sweat and sacrifice physically and psychologically more than the average people, which can justify their high salary.
青少年犯罪的原因:
Young people’s inexperience and gullibility easily lead then into traps. (個人的原因)
The government failing to establish supporting system to offer help to adolescents can explain this social issue. (國家的原因)
在男女平等的意義上使用個人和國家的分析角度也是很有效的:
Every woman is worthy to be respected, educated, and safe from exploitation. It is our responsibility and right to pray, promote, and protect the human and divine rights of all. The world"s stability and prosperity depend on it.
The full and equal participation of women in all spheres of life is essential to social and economic development, the abolition of war, and the ultimate establishment of a united world.
五、文化和道德
文化和道德本來就是雅四大作文中較難的兩個話題,而近來這兩個話題考的頻率又很高??忌环酪矎倪@兩個角度來準(zhǔn)備一下主體段落的觀點。
反對強(qiáng)勢文化入侵:
Globalization might undermine cultural diversity. Multinational corporations promote a certain kind of consumerist culture, in which standard commodities, promoted by global marketing campaigns exploiting basic material desires, create similar lifestyles, which is so-called Coca-Colanization.
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