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大作文題目

In many countries,planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh its disadvantages? (20170729)

高分范文

作者：楊亮

While stuck in traffic jam or wasting excessively much time on their way to somewhere, urban residents all over the world like to complain about their chaotic urban outlay.It sounds rational that a city can be well organised by planning functional areas separately. However, on no account can urban planning be that simple.

每當(dāng)交通堵塞或者為了去某地而在路上耗費(fèi)大量時(shí)間的時(shí)候，全世界的城市居民都想抱怨他們所在城市的混亂布局。獨(dú)立規(guī)劃城市的各個(gè)功能區(qū)聽起來很合理，但是，城市規(guī)劃絕不是如此簡單。

Imagining that we were living in a city with many particular zones,each of which had a specificfunction,such as a business or housing zone. We certainly would meet some troubles there. Primarily, every morning thousands of private vehicles would go to the zone of schools from residential areas, and likewise a great number of cars would go to the zone of malls and supermarkets at weekends. As a result, this directed and heavy traffic flow,without any doubt, could cause traffic jams that people did not want at all. Additionally,dwellers in a city like this need to drive for a long distance to buy their daily necessities since in the living areas there would be no stores planned, and similarly they had to drive out of the zone they were living in to access all kinds of social services like going to hospital, school, and work. In fact, those social services ought to be thought as supporting ones planned near or in housing areas. Accordingly,urban planning like this is doomed to generate great inconvenience for local residents.

想象一下，我們住在一個(gè)有很多特定區(qū)域的城市，每個(gè)區(qū)域都有其特定的功能，如商業(yè)區(qū)或住宅區(qū)。在這里我們肯定會(huì)遇到一些麻煩。首先，每天早晨都會(huì)有成千上萬的私家車從居民區(qū)出發(fā)去學(xué)校所在的區(qū)域。同樣，每逢周末也會(huì)有大量的汽車去商場和超市所在的區(qū)域。結(jié)果就是，毫無疑問，這些定向的巨大車流量會(huì)導(dǎo)致人們不愿意看到的交通堵塞。此外，這個(gè)城市的居民需要開車走很長一段路才能買到他們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹谋匦杵?，因?yàn)樵诰用駞^(qū)根本沒有商店。同樣，他們也必須將車開出居民區(qū)才能獲得其他的社會(huì)服務(wù)，如醫(yī)院、學(xué)校和公司。事實(shí)上，這些社會(huì)服務(wù)應(yīng)該是居民區(qū)里面或附近的輔助性服務(wù)。因此，這樣的城市規(guī)劃注定會(huì)給當(dāng)?shù)鼐用駧砭薮蟮牟槐恪?/p>

Contrarily, advocates to urban layouts like this argue that planning cities in this way makes our cities more manageable. Notwithstanding,the first principle of city planning is, of course,for bringing residents as much convenience as possible. As to city administrators, they are merely public servants whose interests can never be beyond that of the people.We construct cities for offering a good living environment for every citizen there,but not a comfortable working environment for those city administrators.

相反，如此規(guī)劃的支持者們辯稱這樣的城市規(guī)劃會(huì)使我們的城市更便于管理。但是，城市規(guī)劃的首要原則當(dāng)然是要盡可能地給城市居民帶來便利。就城市的管理者而言，他們只是公務(wù)員，他們的利益永遠(yuǎn)不能超越人民的利益。我們建設(shè)城市是為了給每一位城市居民一個(gè)良好的生活環(huán)境，而不是給城市管理者提供一個(gè)舒適的工作環(huán)境。

In a nutshell, living in a city with many zones of different functions must be a nightmare. Meanwhile, city planning is a complicated subject, and obviously it is not as easy as playing the board game Monopoly.

簡單來說，居住在一個(gè)有很多不同功能區(qū)域的城市肯定是個(gè)噩夢。同時(shí)，城市規(guī)劃是一個(gè)非常復(fù)雜的話題，顯然，它不像玩大富翁游戲那么簡單。

注：本文節(jié)選自《雅思寫作三人行》

楊亮老師自評(píng)

首先，城市規(guī)劃類話題隸屬于社會(huì)類話題范疇，在雅思寫作考試中較為常見；其次，本題要求進(jìn)行優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)的對(duì)比，這是非常常見的提問方式；故本題整體難度有限，因此，我的寫法也比較常規(guī)。

開頭段，不僅介紹背景、點(diǎn)明主題，還清晰地表達(dá)了我的立場。隨后的主一段，提出了兩個(gè)論點(diǎn)定向的交通流量和居民區(qū)遠(yuǎn)離社會(huì)服務(wù)，這兩個(gè)論點(diǎn)分別從缺點(diǎn)方面回應(yīng)了主題。如果將這個(gè)主一段分解成兩個(gè)主體段也完全可以。本文中的第二個(gè)主體段，先介紹這種政策的一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)，隨后再反駁這個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)，進(jìn)而證明其錯(cuò)誤性。通過這個(gè)邏輯來完成優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)的比較，是此類問題較為常見的論證方法。本文整體論證邏輯清晰簡單，并且開頭段已經(jīng)很清楚地表達(dá)了立場，因此結(jié)尾段可以自然、簡要地說明結(jié)論。

文章篇幅還是略長，主要原因是主一段的論證過于具體。如果需要?jiǎng)h減篇幅，有如下兩個(gè)辦法：其一是直接刪除主一段的第二個(gè)論點(diǎn)；其二是把主一段的兩個(gè)論點(diǎn)只用一句話說明，再加一句話展開。

看完了以上范文，不知道對(duì)大家有沒有啟發(fā)呢？如果還有更好的想法，歡迎大家文章下留言，互相討論交流哦！

本文的范文來自楊亮老師編著的《雅思寫作三人行》這本書，這本書除了楊亮老師以外，還有兩位寫作名師參與編著，書內(nèi)涵蓋幾乎全部雅思寫作大小作文的主題，擁有上百篇高分范文，可謂是雅思寫作的最佳拍檔！

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