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雅思小作文高分范文含名師點(diǎn)評——混合圖

題目

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (C11T4)

范文

The above table shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after being refurbished. The pie charts below show how satisfied the visitors were before and after the refurbishment.

Looking at the graphs in detail, we can see that the number of visitors increased by 18,000 after the refurbishment, from 74,000 to 92,000. Before the work was carried out. 40% of the visitors interviewed were dissatisfied with the museum. However, this number of dissatisfied visitors fell by 25% after the refurbishment. Furthermore, the number of very dissatisfied visitors halved in this process. It is also interesting to note that the figure for very satisfied visitors increased sharply from only 15% to 35%. In addition. there was also a 10% increase in the number of people who were satisfied. Only a few visitors did not respond to the survey.

It is clear from the graphs that whilst there had been a significant increase in the number of visitors after refurbishment, we can also see a great increase in the satisfaction ratings. The data given indicates a positive development in the museum.

上面的表格顯示了阿什當(dāng)博物館在翻新前后的游客數(shù)量。下面的餅狀圖顯示了參觀者在翻新前后滿意程度的變化。

從圖中可以看出,翻新后游客人數(shù)增加了1.8萬人次,從7.4萬人次增加至9.2萬人次。在翻新前,40%的游客對博物館不滿意。然而,經(jīng)過翻新后這數(shù)字大幅下降了25個(gè)百分點(diǎn)。此外,表示強(qiáng)烈不滿的游客數(shù)量也減少了ー半。有趣的是,表示非常滿意的游客數(shù)量從僅為15%急劇增加到35%。另外,表示滿意的游客數(shù)量也上升了10個(gè)百分點(diǎn)。只有極少數(shù)的游客沒有回應(yīng)調(diào)查。

很明顯,在翻新后游客數(shù)量顯著增加的同時(shí),游客滿意度也大幅提升。該數(shù)據(jù)表明博物館正向著一個(gè)積極的方向發(fā)展。

名師點(diǎn)評

本題雖然是一道混合類圖表題,但是由于第一個(gè)表格中的數(shù)據(jù)太少了所以本文把這部分?jǐn)?shù)據(jù)和第二組餅狀圖中的數(shù)據(jù)放在一起介紹。

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