同意轉(zhuǎn)換是雅思寫(xiě)作提分救命稻草
2024-08-02 09:16:02 來(lái)源:中國(guó)教育在線
雅思托福考試是一個(gè)非常有難度的考試,相信很多在備考階段的小伙伴們,每天都在關(guān)注一些雅思相關(guān)的消息。有同學(xué)問(wèn):同意轉(zhuǎn)換是雅思寫(xiě)作提分救命稻草?今天,一起來(lái)看看吧。
劍9Test2,作文第二篇范文第二段:
Life skill are very important and by doing voluntary work, students can learn how to communicate with others and work in a team but also how manage their time and improve their organizational skills.
By giving them compulsory work activities with charitable community organizations, they will be encouraged to do something more creative.
在這兩段中,
1)第二段中的voluntary work 和第三段中的compulsory work是明確的同意轉(zhuǎn)換,
2)此外第二段中的communicate with others到第三段中就變成了community organizations,詞性發(fā)生改變,但是意思仍舊沒(méi)有變化。
有了這些同意轉(zhuǎn)換,首先是句子長(zhǎng)度增加,尤其是第二段中由but also引導(dǎo)的從句,將證據(jù)長(zhǎng)度進(jìn)行擴(kuò)充,此外就是兩段前后呼應(yīng),且不單調(diào)。那么同意轉(zhuǎn)換在寫(xiě)作中具體有哪些技巧可供使用?快來(lái)看看吧!
同義詞,近義詞
這恐怕是大家最為熟知的一種同意轉(zhuǎn)換了,及使用同義詞或近義詞來(lái)進(jìn)行改變,避免重復(fù),只要詞匯拓展一點(diǎn)點(diǎn),立即可以在作文中產(chǎn)生大改變!大家看過(guò)來(lái)哦~
例子Any government, whether rich or poor, cannot put every penny into education, even though it may be trying to improve overall conditions for education and to create much needed rewards for teachers. Private schools, on the other hand, help to narrow government spending on education by charging wealthy students expensive tuition fees in return for superior learning facilities and highly sought after staff.
本段中的rich和wealthy就是典型的同意轉(zhuǎn)換。
詞性拓展
名詞,形容詞,動(dòng)詞之間進(jìn)行自由切換,保證詞性拓展,但意思不變,增加文章豐富的程度。
例子Activities in environments that pose great danger to humans, such asand active volcano exploration, are ideally suited to robots. Similarly, robots can explore distant planets. NASAs Galileo,
大家看,exploration和explore,是不是無(wú)死角的進(jìn)行了詞性切換?
核心不變變表達(dá)
這是同意轉(zhuǎn)換中較為困難的一種形式,還記得雅思閱讀中將language解釋為【表達(dá)情感或思想的載體】嗎?這就是最典型的核心不變變表達(dá),為大家舉個(gè)例子:
例子Firstly, modern people suffer from greater tension so that they have less time to communicate with each other. More and more people are living in urban areas, where life has a quick rhythm. Due to fierce competition, city dwellers have to be hard-working in order to keep up with the pace of city life. Everybody is busy all the time and the other increasing pressures at work deprive us of a casual way of life. Moreover, living in apartments in isolated blocks, we are becoming more and more removed from each other. And more often than not, it is no longer convenient for us to meet one anther freely.
1首先這段中的greater tension 和 increasing pressures 是同義詞組轉(zhuǎn)換,
2此外less time to communicate with each other和more and more removed from each other說(shuō)的其實(shí)是一個(gè)含義,但是由于巧妙的使用了同意轉(zhuǎn)換,所以看起來(lái)生動(dòng)豐富的多!
說(shuō)了這么多,烤鴨們趕緊拿起筆來(lái)練一練,試試看自己能夠如何運(yùn)用同意轉(zhuǎn)換提升寫(xiě)作格調(diào)!
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