您現(xiàn)在的位置:首頁 - 雅思 - 答疑

雅思作文_寫作中如何讓句子多樣化

2024-08-03 10:49:56 來源:中國教育在線

隨著全球化的加速和教育的多樣化,越來越多的學(xué)生選擇留學(xué),而在申請國外大學(xué)時,語言考試是繞不開的一環(huán),本文和大家說一說:雅思作文:寫作中如何讓句子多樣化,一起往下來看看吧。

雅思作文:寫作中如何讓句子多樣化

句子可長可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表達(dá)。如果句子清一色是簡單句,文章必定很單調(diào)乏味。如果全篇充滿了冗長的復(fù)雜句,讀起來也很費力。最好的方法是以簡單句為基礎(chǔ),配合適當(dāng)?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)雜句。簡單句可長可短,通常要加些附屬成分,如分詞短語、介詞短語、副詞短語、不定式動詞短語,以及節(jié)縮成分。

總之,作者可根據(jù)情況,使句子多樣化,使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個句子的基本概念一樣,但是句式不同,內(nèi)容重點也有些差別:

(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句(1)+2)

(2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (現(xiàn)在分語短語+簡單句)

(3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副詞短語+并列分句(1)-(2) )

(4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (簡單句+形容語短語)

(5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副詞從句+主句)

(1)和(5)的句式最常見;如果加上其他三種互相交替,句子不是更多樣化嗎?

最后,看看這兩個句子要如何多樣化呢?

(6) The young pilot was on his first overseas training.

(7) He felt very uneasy.

(a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.

(b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.

(c) The young pilot's first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.

(d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.

(e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.

(f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.

(g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.

(h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy.

(i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy.

(j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas trainging, he felt very uneasy.

(k) As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.

(l) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy.

在上述12個句子中,(a)-(g)是簡單句;(h)是并列句;(i)-(l)是復(fù)雜句。簡單句除(b)和(g)之外,其他五樣,用的人并不多。人們最喜歡采用復(fù)雜句,尤其是(j)和(k)這兩款;接著便是并列句(h)。如果大多數(shù)人的句子只限于(b),(g), (h), (j)和(k)這五種,而其他的則棄如敝屣,不是很可惜嗎?

以上就是“雅思作文:寫作中如何讓句子多樣化”的全部內(nèi)容了,希望小編整理的資料能幫助到考生。如果想要了解更多相關(guān)資訊,歡迎關(guān)注外語頻道,為您提供更多精彩內(nèi)容。

>> 雅思 托福 免費測試、量身規(guī)劃、讓英語學(xué)習(xí)不再困難<<

- 聲明 -

(一)由于考試政策等各方面情況的不斷調(diào)整與變化,本網(wǎng)站所提供的考試信息僅供參考,請以權(quán)威部門公布的正式信息為準(zhǔn)。

(二)本網(wǎng)站在文章內(nèi)容出處標(biāo)注為其他平臺的稿件均為轉(zhuǎn)載稿,轉(zhuǎn)載出于非商業(yè)性學(xué)習(xí)目的,歸原作者所有。如您對內(nèi)容、版 權(quán)等問題存在異議請與本站聯(lián)系,會及時進(jìn)行處理解決。

語言考試咨詢
HOT
培訓(xùn)費用測算
英語水平測試
1
免費在線咨詢
免費獲取留學(xué)方案
在線咨詢
英語自測
留學(xué)方案
關(guān)注公眾號
  • 麗雅老師
  • 小皮老師
  • 小倩老師
  • 小雅老師