雅思寫作中須規(guī)避的十種開頭

雅思托?？荚囀侨蜃顝V泛使用的英語語言考試之一，被許多國家的大學(xué)、移民機(jī)構(gòu)、企業(yè)和政府部門用作衡量語言能力的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)?？忌枰诼?、說、讀、寫四個(gè)方面進(jìn)行測試，其中有不少同學(xué)想要了解：雅思寫作中須規(guī)避的十種開頭，那么下面中國教育在線小編就來和大家分享一番。

需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭一：中式英文

典型失敗案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

Topic3- Is there fairness in todays business world?

I think in todays society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get baoying.

需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭二：廢話連篇

典型失敗案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. Im very interested in talking about this topic. Because Im also a college student and Im not married

修改方案：開門見山 直奔主題

In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.

Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真題)

Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isnt it? Of course! Its really very very important!

需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭三：觀點(diǎn)模糊

典型失敗案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me

需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭四：偏離主題

典型失敗案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭五：語法錯(cuò)誤

典型失敗案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真題)

About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parents responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭六：過分簡單

典型失敗案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, lets talk about it!

需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭七：用詞不當(dāng)

典型失敗案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we cant take the responsibility to form a family.

需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭八：意思重復(fù)

典型失敗案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭九： 觀點(diǎn)武斷

典型失敗案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence

In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who dont have confidence, they all have failed.

Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who dont obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, Im sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭十：中國俗語

典型失敗案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: Many sons, many lucks

正確說法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: Know is know, dont know is dont know

Topic 3- Do you think ones character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rats son can make hole

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence:A good person is all life safe. We Chinese people always say: Good has good pay, bad has bad pay.

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