雅思寫作四大失敗的開頭寫法

雅思托?？荚噷τ谙胍鰢魧W(xué)或移民的人來說，是一個(gè)非常重要的考試。因此，了解考試的時(shí)間表和出分時(shí)間對于準(zhǔn)備考試的考生來說非常關(guān)鍵。下面中國教育在線外語頻道小編就為大家分享一下“雅思寫作四大失敗的開頭寫法”？

一：啰啰嗦嗦，說不到重點(diǎn)

典型失敗案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. Im very interested in talking about this topic. Because Im also a college student and Im not married

修改方案：開門見山 直奔主題

In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真題)

Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isnt it? Of course! Its really very very important!

二：中式英文人見人恨

典型失敗案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

Topic3- Is there fairness in todays business world?

I think in todays society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get baoying.

三：觀點(diǎn)模糊態(tài)度不明

典型失敗案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me

四：偏離主題不知所云

典型失敗案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

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