慎用雅思作文素材和模板

慎用雅思作文素材和模板，很多同學(xué)對于這個問題有疑問和不解，那么下面就跟著中國教育在線的小編詳細了解一下吧。

中國學(xué)生只在乎是否獲得一個雅思考試成績，而不在乎是否學(xué)的東西在生活中可以應(yīng)用。

模板弄熟，然后背下素材，填進去，素材出現(xiàn)復(fù)雜句和大詞，形式上符合了大部分考試的要求，從而讓開口難和動筆難的學(xué)生屢試不爽的通過大小考試。

雅思的意義，在于考官是英文母語者，他們的標準就一條：我只看你寫的東西是否合理和恰當。(whether you can present ideaslogically and naturally)

模板之害，就是在于學(xué)生即便有想法，也說不完，因為說完了，模板就套不上了。

素材之害，就是在于學(xué)生即便覺得不對，也要寫上去，因為既然背了，不寫就白背了。

該寫的不寫，不該寫的寫了。

在以前的考試能夠活的下去。雅思卻不行。

這就是為什么很多老師和學(xué)生總是覺得雅思不公平，很難。。

其實，是以前的考試太簡單了。

我們看看下面這個題目兩個學(xué)生的段落，還有我的段落對比。

Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is toensure that there are only small differences between the richest and the poorestmembers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

第一個學(xué)生 (用了模板)

Many people think that narrowing the gap between the rich and the poorhelps create a happier society (為了套模板，抄了題目，考官要看到的是真正的觀點).one main reason is that(還是模板，但是這句話說的是社會不公平的壞處，前面一句話說的是貧富減少的好處，兩句話中間思維跳躍)imbalance social distributioncauses some argument and these argument can pose a threat to the society. Forexample (再套模板，這個例其實根本就不是例子，例子是解釋前面名名詞的東西), the crime rate may decrease becausethe poor can afford their living cost and they feel happy because they betreated equality in the society instead of classifying by their property.

第二個學(xué)生 (用了素材)

Less differences between people from different backgrounds make it easierfor them to share equal access to social resources such as educationaloppurtunities, health care etc. by doing so, people can make the same success.For instance, a student from disadvanteged family can also become a high caliberone. When people all can fulfill their potential and succeed in their ownbusinesses, there would not be discriminations(用了素材的觀點，沒有歧視，而這里的上下文根本不可能提到歧視，邏輯一下就亂了). So, people feel happier.

下面是我的段落

Closing the gap between rich and poor requires governments to pay attentionto the well-being of poor people and take action to ensure that these peoplelead a happy life. For example, these people can go to college and have the sameopportunities to get better-paying jobs as those from rich families. They canget rid of poverty and enjoy a reasonable standard of living. This is a vitalpart of a happy society. In contrast, crimes can be rampant in a society wherepeople are at a disadvantage due to their social status.

很多雅思考生總是對自己中國式的備考方法存有妄念，覺得多沖幾次總能過。結(jié)果就是萬年5分，5.5分。

雅思就這么一條路，你可以選擇走很多彎路，回頭再走。

也可以現(xiàn)在就選擇走。

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