雅思寫作語法的實例講解

現(xiàn)在留學的學生越來越多，留學可以開闊眼界，也能學習不一樣的教育體制，而且世界名校眾多，教育水平也一流。下面小編就來和大家說說“雅思寫作語法的實例講解”這個問題

1. Talking too much but doing too few gives rise to make others a terrible impression.

正確形式：Talking too much but doing too few gives rise to a terrible impression.

錯誤解析：因為give rise to 是介詞短語，后面是不能接動詞的，所以必須要修改為名詞形式，直接去掉make others.

2. This above phenomenon can be explained by we change our attitudes towards the lifestyles and by we lose interests on local history of indigenous people.

正確形式：This above phenomenon can be explained by changing attitudes towards the lifestyles and by losing interests on local history of indigenous people.

錯誤解析：因為by 是介詞短語，后面是不能接動詞的，所以必須要修改為名詞形式或者動名詞形式，直接將change 和lose 改為changing 和losing.

3. When it comes to ask the questions about the clear definitions of education and career success. People always hold divergent viewpoints.

正確形式：When it comes to the clear definitions of education and career success, people always hold divergent viewpoints.

錯誤解析：因為when it comes to是介詞短語，后面是不能接動詞的，所以必須要修改為名詞形式或者動名詞形式，直接去掉ask the questions，是多余的成分。另外when 引導的只是一個從句，后面需要真正的主句進行支撐，所以要把people小寫。

4. I still fail to pass the IELTS despite I have already collected pencils with 9 kinds of colors.

正確形式：I still fail to pass the IELTS despite pencils with 9 kinds of colors I have collected together.

錯誤解析：因為despite是介詞短語，后面是不能接動詞或者句子的，可以將其修改為名詞形式或者動名詞形式，將句子：I have already collected pencils with 9 kinds of colors. 調(diào)整為：pencils with 9 kinds of colors I have collected together.

5. Many fans are crazy about love affairs of Hanhan， a well-known Chinese writer, despite they know that he is a playboy.

正確形式：Many fans are crazy about love affairs of Hanhan，a well-known Chinese writer, despite that they know that he is sometimes a playboy.

錯誤解析：因為despite是介詞短語，后面是不能接動詞或者句子的，除了可以將句子修改為名詞形式或者動名詞形式，也可以將despite 修改為：despite that . 另外韓寒并不是總是playboy,所以加上sometimes.

6. Many students refuse to give up unhealthy lifestyles despite they have understood the negatives of illhealth effects.

正確形式: Many students refuse to give up unhealthy lifestyles despite the negatives of illhealth effects.

錯誤解析：介詞不是連詞，一般后面只接名詞或者具備名詞性質(zhì)的短語或者帶連詞的賓語從句，因此不能加句子。常見錯誤有：despite,in spite of , during, because of , due to, 也不能后接動詞。

7. Many poor citizens always depend on the rich give support.

正確形式: Many poor citizens always depend on supports of the rich.

錯誤解析：介詞不是連詞，一般后面只接名詞或者具備名詞性質(zhì)的短語或者帶連詞的賓語從句。不能接動詞或者句子。

8. Life disorder can lead to damage an individuals health.

正確形式: Life disorder can lead to health recession of an individual.

錯誤解析：to在某些情況下，(如詞組giverise to , contribute to , pay attention to , conform to , lead to)都是介詞短語+名詞或者動名詞。

9. Nobody could deny the importance of environment protection , for the simple reason is that it is of far-reaching significance in the future .

正確形式: Nobody could deny the importance of environment protection, for its far-reaching significance in the future.

錯誤解析：特殊的介詞，如：for， since, after, before在大部分時候都是介詞，不接完整的句子。

10. Individuals have different attitudes towards for the definition of happiness.

正確形式：Individuals have different attitudes towards the definition of happiness.

錯誤解析：介詞后面不能再接介詞。注意一些比較特殊的介詞如：towards。

介詞短語加了句號錯誤表達： With the society develops. people begin to realize the importance of biological balance.

正確形式：With the development of society, people begin to realize the importance of biological balance.(介詞短語不是句子，不能加句號)

第二組一句話不能有2個動詞，也不能沒有謂語動詞。

11. It is advertising makes customers buy something impulsively.

正確形式：It is advertising that makes customers buy something impulsively.

錯誤解析：因為 is 和makes 都是動詞，所以該句話有2個動詞，需要去掉一個動詞，本句中可以把makes 前面增加that,這樣后面就是定于從句了。從而該句就只有一個動詞。

12. There is a research shows that many parents are depend on teachers give support.

正確形式：There is a research showing that many parents are depending on teachers who give support.

錯誤解析：本句的錯誤太多，主要是謂語動詞太多，要記住一個主句只能有一個位于動詞，而一個從句也只能有一個謂語動詞。而主句中的is和show就是多一個重復了，而從句中：are ,depend, give都是動詞，而只能有一個動詞。

13. There was a famous Chinese book describe a monkey , a pig , a sand monk and a true monk go to west for pilgrimage.

正確形式：There was a famous Chinese book describing a monkey , a pig , a sand monk and a true monk go to west for pilgrimage.

錯誤解析：要記住一個主句只能有一個謂語動詞，而一個從句也只能有一個謂語動詞。而主句中的was 和describe就是多一個重復了，需要將describe 修改為：describing 作為后置定語。

14. The number of the population was decreased in the 1990 to 1995, the figure of population was increased in the years of 1996 and 2000, the data was then continue increase in the last 5years.

正確形式：The number of the population decreased in the 1990 to 1995, the figure of population increased in the years of 1996 and 2000, and the data was then continuously increasing in the last 5years.

錯誤解析：要記住一個主句只能有一個謂語動詞，而該句中的謂語動詞太多，所以需要去掉was 并且將最后一個分句中的was then continue increase 中的continue改成副詞continuously, decrease 改成was decreasing.

15. I earned the money is the least.

正確形式：I earned the least money.或者my income was the least.

16. I was a wolf come from Nanjing.

正確形式：I was a wolf coming from Nanjing.

17. Now there are always many new things come out every day.

正確形式：Now there are always many new things coming out every day.

18. 謂語動詞：

錯誤表達:There have many people believe that mobile phones are useful.

正確表達：There are many people who believe that mobile phones are useful.

錯誤解析：(不存在There have的形式，而且There be結(jié)構(gòu)后不能再加謂語動詞。)

第三組：逗號不能夠連接2個完整的句子

19. There are plenty of universities in China , most of that are not good enough.

正確形式：There are plenty of universities in China , most of which are not good enough. There are plenty of universities in China and most of that are not good enough. / There are plenty of universities in China; most of that are not good enough. /There are plenty of universities in China .Most of which are not good enough.

錯誤解析： 逗號不能連接2個完整的句子。所以需要將其中一個句子變成從句，或者使用分號或者句號來代替逗號。

20. I cry , you cry.

正確形式：I cry; you cry. / I cry and you cry. / I cry. You cry.

21. We all tried our best,however, we lost the game.

正確形式：We all tried our best. However, we lost the game./ We all tried our best; however, we lost the game.

錯誤解析：即使是however,也不能連接前后都是完整的'句子，因為however是副詞，只有and 和but 這2個連接詞才可以連接2個完整的句子。

22. China has achieved great prosperity ,however ,its culture suffered a lot.

正確形式：China has achieved great prosperity .However ,its culture suffered a lot./China has achieved great prosperity; however,its culture suffered a lot.

錯誤解析：注意這點和單獨的however, 將一個句子的主語和謂語動詞隔開的句子有本質(zhì)的區(qū)別。比如：students, however, always expect their high praise from parents and teachers. 該句中是一個句子，所以可以用however 將主語和謂語分開。

23. They always feel boring about visiting some places where they are no fresh and no extremely attractive talking points， therefore, local museums and historical sites cannot be drawn into much discussion as they are without cartoons, movie stars and sports.

正確形式：They always feel boring about visiting some places where they are no fresh and no extremely attractive talking points.Therefore, local museums and historical sites cannot be drawn into much discussion as they are without cartoons, movie stars and sports.

錯誤解析： 注意 therefore, on the other hand, on the contrary 這些類似的詞組或者副詞都是副詞成分，并不能連接前后都是完整的句子。所以需要修改為：將逗號改為句號或者分號。

24. Student s are always tired of sitting in the classroom for a whole morning, thus show their resentment with the current teaching method.

正確形式：Student s are always tired of sitting in the classroom for a whole morning, and thus show their resentment with the current teaching method.

錯誤解析：thus 照樣是插入語，是副詞成分，不是連接詞，所以不能連接前后都是完整的句子。

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