雅思寫作到底怎么寫
2022-12-19 10:58:15 來(lái)源:中國(guó)教育在線
在雅思寫作中,一切的寫作技巧都不如對(duì)寫作的細(xì)節(jié)把握。在平時(shí)的寫作練習(xí)中,雅思寫作到底怎么寫?下面一起來(lái)看看相關(guān)知識(shí)。
雅思寫作到底怎么寫
一.拒絕無(wú)謂的單詞和詞組
1.一些不必要的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來(lái)任何相關(guān)的或重要的信息,完全可以被刪掉。
比如:When all things are considered,young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents,in my opinion.
這句話當(dāng)中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為:
Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
2.替換無(wú)聊的表達(dá),故意寫出復(fù)雜的長(zhǎng)難句,但是讓整個(gè)句子顯得特別冗長(zhǎng),其實(shí)并不會(huì)給你的雅思作文加分。
例如:Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents,they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
“due to the fact that”就是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子,可以替換,簡(jiǎn)化為下面的表達(dá)方式:
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents,they did not have the options that young people have now.
二.拒絕重復(fù)詞匯和表達(dá)
1.雅思寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中有一點(diǎn):豐富性。很多考生做不到在寫作中使用更豐富的詞匯和表達(dá),也就與高分失之交臂。有的時(shí)候雖然詞匯沒有重復(fù),但意思卻有重復(fù)。這時(shí)候可以做一些簡(jiǎn)化的工作。
例如下面這個(gè)例子:The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
large對(duì)一個(gè)farm來(lái)說(shuō)就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改為:
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)方式為:
My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2.有時(shí)一個(gè)詞組可以用一個(gè)更簡(jiǎn)單的單詞來(lái)替換。
例如:My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents'farm.
這里的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly,顯得更為簡(jiǎn)潔:
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.
三.段落的中心內(nèi)容與中心句
1.一個(gè)段落只有一個(gè)中心思想,這個(gè)中心思想通常會(huì)體現(xiàn)在一個(gè)總結(jié)性的句子當(dāng)中,這句話叫做中心句。中心句在學(xué)術(shù)文章中常常落在段首,以方便閱讀。中心句如同射擊的靶子,要直指文章主題,這樣后面的論點(diǎn)才不會(huì)偏離題目,因此非常重要。下面再給同學(xué)們一些句子,可以靈活應(yīng)用于立論段,即證明自己觀點(diǎn)的段落。
It is hard to argue with the fact that workers are the direct/first beneficiaries of this working fashion.
There is no doubt that many employees would favour/welcome telework.
Statistics show that there are few things which impact the human mind more than mass media.
The mass media hold a large share of importance in society.
A life without the presence of mass media would seem improbable for many.
However,this does not mean that…
2.下面是一些可以用于讓步段的中心句:
there are certainly some minor downsides in…
I admit that…is not perfect.
I understand why some people oppose…
Of course there are some opposite voices against…
the disapproving voices also sound reasonable.
以上是關(guān)于雅思寫作到底怎么寫的一些分享,除了學(xué)習(xí)各部分雅思備考知識(shí),備考雅思還要了解自己的實(shí)力并制定實(shí)際些的目標(biāo)。最后中國(guó)教育在線預(yù)祝大家取得理想的雅思成績(jī)。
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